Reviews for Come With Me
Lunaliceazreal chapter 1 . 9/7
Sweet Pip and Damien are hot
TaliaUntold chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Dude that was wicked!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
yay!...but they are like...9 when that episode comes out!
Decipher Philosophy chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Oh wow...
Sunshine-aki chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Oh my...
Angecael Gliorixx chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
O-o Wow. Damien is kinky.. Well he is the son of Satan after all.
craziunderurbed999 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Well, they're only eight...but still, very sexy...
Splove chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Wow that was amazing and intense. I'm assuming they're much older. Some people said it went by too fast or it was too sudden but Damien would totally do that. He's very unpredictable.
detective reivil chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
short, but really nice!
remnantxxx chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Mizuni-no-neko chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
It started out really well, but then it kind of went downhill. There were so many different ways to go after Damien tortured Cartman. But unfortunately you went with a sex scene between young children that went by in a flash.

My advice to you is either keep them 8 and take out the sex or leave the sex and make them older.

Also develop the plot a little more. I thought it was going somewhere after Damien told Pip to follow him and he tortured Cartman, but all plot development was swept aside for the lemon. I would suggest putting in more plot before the sex so that it doesn't seem like two different fics were sewn together or take out the sex and just take the plotline somewhere.
Agnes Tanabru chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Woah, what the hell was that? I was just reading, thinking it was a nice, innocent fanfic but then it was... not. That was scary. No offense. I got the first part.
MetrionZinthos chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
See now, THAT'S how that should have ended.

NoLongerActiveATM chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
This is really good, the only freaky thing, there 8 or 9! ;)
freeflyingwolf chapter 1 . 7/27/2009

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