|Reviews for Alphabetical Murder|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16
this is pretty good! can u add more chapters
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/6/2013
Peach is dead?! I want daisy dead, NOW! *sobs for peach and has a funeral
| Starlight9910 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I swear...this is totally AWESOME! UPLOAD UPLOAD!
| Tails-is-pwnage chapter 9 . 5/4/2011
I think that Luigi, Flurrie, and Watt are the killers. They are the most suspicious 0-0.
HOPE YOU CONTINUE AT SOME POINT!
T.I.P.- Stay Awesome! :)
| Tails-is-pwnage chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
cool story! I will read more later! Kind of in a hurry!
T.I.P.- Stay Awesome
| I moved accounts chapter 8 . 5/1/2011
I might as well start at the first chapter:
Goombella DID mention the Rogueport murders first, then said that she found the info on the Internet. She also used to live in Rogueport, which is even more suspicious. Also, if you've played Paper Mario: TTYD, she has the tattle attack. With that, she could know the enemy's stats! With Goombario's death, anybody could've poisoned the apple at anytime of the day. The problem is: Who would be able to get a deadly poison? Part of me wants to say either Goombella or Vivian, but I don't know why...
After the first few deaths, Luigi kept complaining about his party being cancelled, but only around Mario. Why? It some sort of big secret? Also, he has the ability to jump high ( that is shown in multiple games: the best proof is in SPM) so he could have possibly jumped onto the bridge and pushed Paper Yoshi off. Of course, I believe that Birdo and Watt were behind him, but they could've possibly been looking the other way! Also, before Ms. Mowz's death, you referred to the killer as a he. Does this have anything to do with who the actual killer is?
When they were stating about where they were for two of the deaths, it may be possible that Goombella lied. Is this true, or was she cracking under pressure? People were also suspicious of Toad, because he had moon shoes to possibly jump on the light rail and push Paper Yoshi off. He said his highest jump was seven feet, but a in the chapter before, Parakarry said that they were about twenty feet above the tracks! There is no way Toad was the killer. You also mentioned that any flying characters could have done it, but there doesn't seem to be enough proof for it...
When the light went off before Peach was killed, Luigi was not mentioned until after she was dead. My guess is that he ran out, jumped through the window, cut Flurrie's wrist then ran back to the group before the lights went back on! Also, when Lakilester was killed, Luigi was with the group, but Watt and Flurrie were not. This made me feel uncertain about Luigi, but he then mentioned that there may be more than one killer. How would he know this? Because he's working with Flurrie and Goombella! One character mentioned that the killer was floating before Waluigi was killed, and Watt was knocked out at the time! Also, Luigi and Flurrie couldn't know that much about everyone, so they used Goombella and her tattle ability!
One last thing: The gloves Daisy found must have been Luigi's, but I don't recall her even being there at any time! Did she sneak in or something, or was she part of Luigi's group?
Also note how Luigi kept snickering and smirking all the time.
| I moved accounts chapter 6 . 3/12/2011
Yeah, I'm back...
Okay, so Luigi and Toad are both mad at Sushi for calling them out? Does this mean that Sushi could be the killer? She could be trying to put false evidence on the table to cover it up? Now I'm VERY confused... But I still think it's Luigi.
| I moved accounts chapter 9 . 3/11/2011
Something tells me that the killer is Luigi.. But the person needs to be strong enough to drown DK! Plus cracking Diddy's jaw like that would require some stregnth. Okay, now I'm confused! It also seems like Goombella could be the killer as well, since she was the one who brought up the Rogueport murder first.. She also was most likely lying when she said that thing about where she was for Ms. Mows and Paper Yoshi's death. I'm probably wrong: It could be someone who is rarely mentioned. Overall, my top guess is Luigi, then Goombella, then Flurrie, then Daisy. :) Please update soon!
| Ittybit chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Maybe its Luigi...
| charz456 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Wow Goombario puked up his own stomach and bled to death because he ate an apple! Meh, I never really liked him anyways. So far I like this fic it is very good I can't wait to read the rest of it.
| Shardi chapter 9 . 5/20/2010
The killer is Bow. Yoshi and Wario must die next.
| Scarpine496 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
This is quite a good story. I think Luigi is probably the killer as he keeps smirking all the time and only cared about his party after the first death. I thought it meant the characters would be killed in alphabetical order, (e.g Bobbery would die first, Yoshi last, B before Y) rather than the cause of death being alphabetical.
| Cyanide the Sneasel chapter 9 . 10/19/2009
i think the murderer is Crump cause he's strong enough to open a jaw that wide (besides Grubba)
| harvestfan chapter 9 . 10/18/2009
I still say its Luigi. Something is just not right about him. I just hope Yoshi doesn't die. ...maybe I shouldn't have said that.
I dunno... does breaking someone's jaw kill them THAT fast? Well on second thought I don't want to know.
| James Birdsong chapter 9 . 10/18/2009
I'm glad you did your best. I'm glad this was not terrible