|Reviews for Victorie: Story of a Girl|
| ronsbabiesmomma chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
this was poorly written. her name is victoire. i know you said get over it in the summary but seriously. how do you expect people to even consider your story with an attitude like that. and secondly... well... there is not secondly. this was poorly written, probably in five minutes b/c you were bored. i'm just saying. it has potential, you could have done it a lot better
| Dr. Dawg chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
I try to be nice in reviews. No. Never write fanfiction again. Her name isn't Victory, it's Victoire. Deal with it.
| BlessedMay chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Okay... so pretty much, there seems to be no logic in the order of the story other than to follow the lyrics. As much as I love song fics (and believe me I do, I've written a few myself!), it helps a reader if you keep the story itself progressing in a logical, chronological order along with the song. Otherwise... you get people like me who are utterly lost from start to finish. :-D
Btw, it's not Victory. It's Victoire. It's a french thing. And... please, use spell check.
| Little Soldier Boy chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
victioire, not victory
| Mandy chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
um... I'm really sorry to say that your story completely lost me. And, by the way, her name is Victoire, not Victory. Names like that don't get translated into english.
| taryn chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
what the hek!
| snaplappl21 chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
umm..her name is Victoire...and I know that's victory in french, but her name's not Victory..