|Reviews for Charmed Child: A Mermaid Story|
| babyjugs chapter 7 . 4/7/2009
cool short chapter!
| 7DCD chapter 13 . 1/11/2009
...And then? What happens then? -curious- XD I should be doing my science homework than reading this, but... XD Update soon! I googled charge and whitelighter... XD
| cheshirejin chapter 11 . 12/5/2008
Well when I saw that the main character, Pandora, was a white lighter/mermaid/immortal I was expecting her to turn into a huge Mary Sue at any moment but so far you have kept her from doing that. good job. The storyline is interesting the story itself could use more descriptions and stuff but it is well written.
I also admire that you have posted eleven chapters and not gotten much feedback because I see that as a sign that you are writing for the love of writing instead of catering to an audience and that is really admirable.
| The Feral Candy Cane chapter 8 . 12/1/2008
Oh snap. 'Dora's going down.
A little short on detail, but altogether not a bad story. Good job.