|Reviews for The Avenger|
| zei1827 chapter 11 . 1/15
Y now gets in the limelight..oh well,great story! I love your rendition of all deathnote characters :) one of the best spin offs that exists!
| Merlin's Starry Underpants chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
Please update! This is one of the best Death Note fanfics I've read.
| Avengel Azrael chapter 2 . 12/10/2013
That was good, really good. I'm not nearly as sly as Raito is and yet this chapter made me feel as such. Not only can you make manipulative character, but can also manipulate emotions! As all good authors can do, of course. It is amazing how much you can smoothly fit into one chapter. I find myself thinking, "Hmm I need to mention that in a review...and that...and that...and-wait and I still on chapter 2?" I didn't even consider changing the records themselves. How do you come up with such things? I have to keep reminding myself that he is 13. I keep picturing him as his high school/college self from the anime. It kinda brings his intelligence into perspective because he is 13 and I am 15 and he is learning things I learned when was 14 I believe. I was thinking, "Heck! I can do that math! ...Wait, he's 13 isn't he..." Anyway I didn't think he would be joining Wammy's, neither was I surprised; however. It made me extremely happy. This is so exciting! The test he took for Wammy's sounded fun! I probably wouldn't do very well on them though. I'm no genius. That may be debatable when it comes to you! Anyway I loved this chapter and am thoroughly ensconced in the progression this fiction. Onto the next chapter!
| Avengel Azrael chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Phew! Deep breaths. That was intense! Man you had me panicking and yelling and almost crying and oh Kami that got the adrenaline pumping. That was extremely well written! Within a sentence you ramped up the intensity and got my adrenaline flowing! I was actually already invested before I read the tragedy. I admit I guessed that Sayu would be killed; though, the way you wrote it was not what I expected at all! I also didn't suspect that his father and mother would also be killed. I didn't even consider that the Red Dragon syndicate would be involved! That scene where his mother was being raped, maybe written too well. I'm happy it was like that, don't get me wrong! It had me nearly in tears and still stirs pity, disgust, and hate in my gut just thinking about it. Really this was absolutely brilliant. There is not just going to be some time skip when I click the next button right? I hope not. Okay, I have calmed down a bit (my heart is still pounding) and it is time for me to keep reading. I have high hopes and expectations from one of my favorite authors! Thank you for writing this!
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
Wow. The relationship between BB and Light is really interesting. It really makes me wonder how L will come in to all of this. It isn't labelled discontinued, so it's not dropped, right? Anyways, please update soon! :D
| Shuuwai chapter 11 . 11/21/2013
I had that moment of clicking to the next chapter... but yeah lolol.
Its interesting... especially between Light and Beyond.
Although with L's presence, I wonder what he'll do next :3
| Awesome me chapter 11 . 11/4/2013
Nuuuuu no more chapters? I was reallllly liking this fanfiction!
| TOPhat114 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Still faithfully rereading this story in hopes of a new chapter? I noticed this one isn't on your discontinued list...I hope it won't join it :( this has been one of my favorite if not the best death note story I've ever read. I think you portrayed Light particularly well. He's just the right amount of childish temperament and self-delusional personality. He may be a genius but he lacks some common sense in terms of his feelings.
| superfan8 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
I sincerely hope that you haven’t dropped this story forever and I was a little surprised by the plot result on which story should be updated! But then again The Avenger is your oldest uncompleted story and many fans of this story must have been unaware about the poll like me. But then again what do I know I guess I’m just a bit disappointed that my favorite story didn’t have a high score.
I love this story and I always reread it when I’m in need of a good Death Note fic!
Please continue this story at some point, though I do not want to pressure you into writing stories if you haven’t got the motivation or time at the moment. I understand that some of your other stories have priority at the moment but as a fan of this story I would love some news! I know you haven’t abandoned this story (Thank you so much) since you haven’t declared so on your blog and therefor I still hold a little hope!
You’re an amazing author, please continue writing!
| Kyuubi's Death chapter 11 . 9/5/2013
nice chapter _
i hope you update soon, it lets us know your feeling well.
| Barley47 chapter 11 . 9/2/2013
Oh please don't give up in this story! It's excellent and I simply need more! Thank you
| machi-pan chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
I'm probably living on false hope...but I feel like I'm going to die, knowing that I haven't seen Light's reaction towards finally meeting L. Or everyone's towards Light's persona. OR JUST EVERYTHING! This fic is absolutely one of my favorites! Probably my most... Q n Q False hope, but I really hope you update one day...one day...
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
Light acts like a psychopath.
| Inie chapter 11 . 5/20/2013
Please update this, I love it to bits!
| Yukino-chan chapter 11 . 4/14/2013
omg! pls don't say this is abandoned! love it to bits!