Reviews for Hot Landing Zone
Rita01tx chapter 8 . 1/24/2013
Yay! I love a good HEA and this was a good one!
Rita01tx chapter 7 . 1/24/2013
At least this time together showed them how it could be, if only they followed their hearts!
Rita01tx chapter 6 . 1/24/2013
Thirty condoms isn't gonna be enough! Hot damn!
Rita01tx chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Tough, smart Marine or not, Edward doesn't stand a chance against her LOL! {Doesn't he know that man's strongest survival instinct is to procreate?}
Rita01tx chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
I could just see Bella danglin' from Edward's snare LMAO! And, now that he's seen her in all her glory, the UST is amped up to the max!
Rita01tx chapter 3 . 1/24/2013
OK! Bella has survival skills she didn't even know she had! Good for her! And, I wonder if either of them will sleep well tonight LOL!
Rita01tx chapter 2 . 1/24/2013
Well painted description of our hot Gunnery Sergeant Edward Cullen!
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Very exciting! Love it!
KatHat chapter 8 . 1/22/2013
Sweet ending! Excellent way to wrap this up!

OMG. . . I just now looked at the date this was published. 2008? Seven damn years ago! Holy smokes!

Great story!

Kat
KatHat chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
Well...why does it have to be gone in the morning?

They are exactly what the other needs!
KatHat chapter 6 . 1/22/2013
Woo-hoo! Hot as hell-fire! Bella's not going to have any clothes left!
KatHat chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
Hot!
KatHat chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
Your descriptions are lovely! Makes me feel like I am there!

OK, I can't help it - collage, and you spelled it that way twice, is like a group of pictures grouped together. When you go to a university, it's spelled college.

Also, the way someone/something smells is scent, not sent:

His every nuance battered her with a sudden heat and awareness, his sent, the carved muscles of his chest, her need to touch him.

And, "Your assuming a lot about me, Edward." Should be You're.

Love the story!

Kat
KatHat chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
Love their attraction!
KatHat chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
Sounds interesting!

The teacher in me wants to get a magic eraser and correct the handful of typos!
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