Reviews for Open Your Heart |
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![]() ![]() Okay,I really like the story and all, theres just one little mistake: Alice was not with the Cullens the time Rosalie found Emmett... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I like it, your a regular Stephanie Meyer. And I liked how you put that cute little thing between Edward and Rosalie there. That SO would have happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what about if you write like a 2-3 shot? You could write about his first months as a vampire and all- and then it could end with him kissing Rose. Great Job with the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome. I'd never really thought about the bear attack until now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I loved this! It was perfect, you captured Rosalie just right! Well done ] Debs x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! i know it's a one shot, but PLEASE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, I'm really sorry I didn't review earlier, I didn't know that you already posted it! sorry! It's really good, thx again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() do i like it of course i like it! i think you should keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good oneshot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was better the second time! LOL! Your stories are as great as always! Keep Writing! -*~SakuraAlice~*- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. I love it! Great job! (*_*) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! I would love to see a continuation. Good job! |