If you ever decide to change ir add things to this story I thin you should include Veronica and Ash at least making out. It would be great

Please finish ash and misty need a happy ending. I want ash to tell misty about the small house next to the gym. I think that they should make amends with jessie, james and meowth. I think that ashs dad should make a sudden reappearance (you know as a twist). We should see daisy's kids.

Please update this story

Please continue writing, great world building

you are dropping a lot of hints that Daisy is pregnant wonder what everyone's reaction will be

he's gotta go sell some insurance

hmmmm who can I think of that sells bottle caps at tournaments, or who speaks like that

please don't abandon it. update please

more please

like it please more it has been almost two years please continue

This story grips me and im sad there isn't more yet but im willing to wait, hope to see more soon!

Loved the writing up until this chapter. Starting this off with a rape scene kinda kills the mood. There was no justification for this scene...If you were to add some humor maybe with solidad or the pokemon, it would've been much better. Rest of the chapter flows nicely!

hope we see more soon

yes but I feel like the focus of Misty and Ash has been decreasing as the chapters go on

I hate to nitpick and honestly, until I looked it up I thought the same thing, but Eevee doesn't evolve into leafeon with a leaf stone, it evolves into leafeon when it levels up near a moss stone. I have no idea WHY they couldn't use the ready-made evolution method for this eeveelution, but I digress.