Great work I read alot of fanfiction and its hard to come by good writers like you keep it up

Simply great

Good story! Though I'm really wanting to know. Do Misty and Ash actually marry then or?

I enjoyed the story, overall. Being a fellow pokeshipper, I enjoyed the Misty and Ash aspect of the plot. I should have inferred from the rating that more sexual themes would be presented. I was not particularly fond of the scene were Ash was forced to have sex. It seemed out of place to me, as it took away from the Ash and Misty idea of the story. In the end though, the progression of the plot kept me wanting to read more. I hope that someday you decide to continue and write more about Ash and Misty, Ash's time as a gym leader, and anymore of his adventures. Cheers to a story well written!

Will we have a new chapter before Christmas?

Fucking amazing. Wish the ending could have been a bit better though. Nice work!

Love the fic. Ash is really grown up. More misty and ash scenes please!

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Great story so far! I look foward to reading the rest very soon!

Honestly i hope to you don't have drew and may in our face.

I like ash with all the girls he has met, misty, may and dawn.

and when i choose a fic to read where he only gets one of them and it the one that he has known the longest, i don't want to be reminded of the others.

Wow, this has been an amazing story so far and I can't wait to read the next update! Please do so soon and keep up the spectacular work. I love Kai and Kazia. Kai is a CLASSIC mystery guy who is fun to listen to! Kazia, ya just a perfect angle as Dawn's cousin:) Daisy Oak is pregnant with twins, by Kai, nice!

Kai reminds me of Neji Hyuuga before the chunnin exams with all the fate/destiny talk

great chapter :)

A rich spoiled snob like Nigel doesn't let anything end off their terms unless forced.

So awesome. Keep it up.

So GoldenrodVegas?