That poor maintenance worker! lol

Interesting chapters. I like the bakery trio. They seem to be a wacky bunch. Until next time.

This is why you don't sleep with the TV on. It'll mess you up!

I've mostly enjoyed the story up to this point, though i haven't been a fan of Misty's characterization completely. I can accept the girl has tried to move on after 5 years, but she often acts like Ash isn't even affecting her at times. Also i just have a real hard time seeing Misty accept a guy like this Nigel. And Ash seems to take it way to well at times too. But it's a minor complaint because i saw where you were leading.

But then I read this chapter, and it was a real turn off honestly. I mean you had a guy drugged, raped, and then nonchalantly act like nothing happened, only to go make out with the girl he actually wants to be with? That was a bizarre freaking turn that came out of nowhere. I know you wrote this a while back, but man maybe reconsider revising this chapter. I'm not sure i want to continue the story at this point. I'm a guy and i know i wouldn't be skipping down the street happily if this just happened to me.

Love it

welcome back and excellent chapters, I dont think you have lost your touch. I have been going through the same issues with life and writing. Hope all is well and I look forward towards the next whenever that may roll out.

Damn, what a good couple of chapters! I can't wait for the wedding, and plz don't take too long this time. Keep up great work. Laters

Great couple of chapters, I was so happy to see not one but two new chapters for this fantastic story. Looking forward to the wedding and seeing what else is coming in this story. Ash is going to be in for an interesting time as certain people seem to be keen to turn this day into a double wedding (which shouldn't be possible as it takes time to get wedding certificates and what ever else you need to tie the knot but with his circle of friends if they wanted to pull it off they probably would, even though I don't think Ash and Misty are ready for that step yet anyway but that might not stop their friends from trying).

Until the next one.

Damn that was one INTENSE dream sequence! Hope it led him to his answer. Otherwise he is super dense. :P Look forward to the wedding.

Hey, so I used to love this fic. One of my favorites. I might even give it a go from the start if you're going to start updating it again. But I just wanted to let you know that the formatting is off on the fic. Or at least it is for the mobile site. Your dialog is all blocked together without the "enter" space between characters changing.

I'm unsure if it'll show up up in the review but basically it's like this:
"Hi what's up?" /enter/
"Not much!"

Instead of
"Hi what's up?" /enter/
/enter/
"Not much!"

It just makes it harder to read

Oh shit

So Hot!

Argh! Stupid nigel

That dance was so hot!

I'm in love with your ash