|Reviews for Having a Marvelous Time|
| Comment person chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
its a shame that ppl dont write about Heroscape. It would be such a great fanfic spot.
Anyways, I read the 5 chapters, they are great.
From, Comment person
| Karkadinn chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
This is turning out to be an interesting story so far. You're doing a great job of using flippancy as a delicate balancing tool between Marvel and 'Scape personalities, and building up a plausible crossover world. All the characterization seems to be reasonable, except that Einar's a bit of a wuss for the military themed general. ;)
Might want to do something about the chapter underlining, though, it's a bit distracting.