Reviews for The Deal
Maxx6 chapter 9 . 11/3/2009
Damn! I knew that...and this time Cena was actually helping Shawn (even is there is a question if he really HAD to kiss him...but it probably made him warmer...;-p)

And damn! (for the second time) There is this picture of Shawn. All wet and hot...and I can't even enjoy it, cause he's freezing and miserable. Damn!
Maxx6 chapter 8 . 11/3/2009
Hell...Cena is nice and kind and all that but...god, I keep feeling like he's going to cause Shawn some serious troubles...

Oh yeah and JBL is a bastard, right. I've once again remebered how much I hate that *bep*
Maxx6 chapter 7 . 11/3/2009
RE:AN at the . Those looks were killers. Absolutelly...new level to kicked-puppy-look. Hell, I had hard time not to jump through the screen and in the time and to just go and kick JBL ass...

Review: LOL Interesting.. With that pout,smile and looks it almost starts to seem like Shawn could get JBL do whatever he wanted if he tried...

Or that's what I thought before reading the AN at the end. He's going to get even worse? Oh damn...
Maxx6 chapter 5 . 11/3/2009
I don't hate you. I hate JBL. I like Cena (poor lil kid LOL) and I love Shawn. Which obviously leaves me with loving XxShawns Guardian AngelxX for guiding him so well, right? LOL;-)
Maxx6 chapter 4 . 11/3/2009
Uh-huh...gods help me...JBL is not so gross anymore...Or,hmm...more human, kind of...

It's funny how you make Shawn twist every bad thing that happens to somehow be his foult. Or not funny, but sad. And that some ppl do this in RL too...
Maxx6 chapter 3 . 11/3/2009
Hell,as much as JBL is still gross...my imagination keeps putting me in his shoes... Which is just wrong,srsly...LOL

You describe the scenes so perfectly it's actually like a movie...or painting...
Maxx6 chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Ah...and now the good times are over and here comes...the fun! For us at least ;-))

Yea,JBL is just gross...
Maxx6 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
LOL I don't even know who's Mike, so no laughing here;-)

Now to the review. U know, since I don't know these guys all that much, my feelings to them are kind of forming right now... Well, except Shawn. Him I like realy much already:)

Can't help it,I know JBL only from HBK/JBL feud so Cena has all of my sympathies right now.

And ..hm,sorry, gotta go read the next chapter ;-p Just can't wait to see what's going to happend to make what looks more like a happyend go wrong (or right...um, well, change;)
FortheLoveofWrestling chapter 28 . 10/29/2009
i read through this whole HBK/JBL fic just to get some Taker/JoMo action. maybe i'm sick and twisted and weird, but i kind of got into the HBK/JBL thing. didn't think i would. really great job.

oh yeah, and that Taker/JoMo stuff... LOVES IT! and you used his bedazzled abs!

FTW indeed. SLASH is where it's at.
Chisato-chan chapter 28 . 5/23/2009
I love, it's really good !

And you're welcome, I really loved reading this wonderful story!
Haricot-Vertes chapter 28 . 5/16/2009
I loved the epilogue.

And don't worry I'm already reading Heart to Hart.
takers dark lover chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
ok I went to the link and read the first chapter. i really don't know how i missed this story. is there another story by out there by the same name? i know i've read a story called "The Deal" but it is not this one.

i thought this was a good chapter. i will have to finish this story tommarow because i'm just to tried to do it now.
SkyeEyes16 chapter 28 . 5/15/2009
Thank you!

So that was the end...NOT! XD So I guess I have to go read Heart to Hart now. And here I go thinking it was all over. XD So I'm excited. The saga goes on. Woot!
Animal Luvr 4 Life chapter 28 . 5/14/2009
Aww, that was so cute! They are so made for each other!
AnonymousPunk chapter 28 . 5/14/2009
Oh! A Nice surprise to have this tie into the other story.

Thanks for the shout out ;)
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