Reviews for In the Gloaming
milktea5 chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
I HOPE YOU WILL REGAIN YOUR INTEREST BACK. OH PLEASE! I WANT MORE. IS THIS A PART OF "SIMPLE"? THE TITLE OF THE STORY? OH PLEASE! REPLY!
Fatal Mars chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I had to read this twice to really get what this story was about. I am shocked at the small amount of reviews you received. I feel like this is a great story to go into dept about past Makoto. No one really knows much about her, but I like to believe she is wild, but beautiful like a stallion I guess. I believe the reason why your fanfiction stands out is because you know how to use your words. That is something few people manage to grasp, but you do it beautifully of course. I bow in awe.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Good.
Jess chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
You know, I'd really love to see a multi chaptered fic out of you. You have these great snippets and one shots, but they always feel like there's got to be more that can happen afterwards.
apostrophus chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
fhdsajkfhfdhsjafksdhl So pretty. ;o; Interesting comment on the hair color. And very good grammar ('cept for one 'it's'. )

~Amunet 8D