Reviews for Edward's Epiphany
Eliph95 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
love renesmee's thoughts! so cute! :)
ol2bob chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Daddy…the deeper voice is daddy…I love his voice…’- aww... yes, if only this was kept up for the rest of the book.. I'm so glad you wrote this. fills a little of the void I felt in BD
katmom chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Wow, what an incredibly sweet picture you painted here.

I loved the baby's lullaby too. I could almost hear it...

Thanks for sharing these moments...

Kathie
ritz27 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
'wait till esme sees you like that'..i really want to know what esme would have thought if she did see edward like that.

can you write that please?

i loved it!

u are one of my fav authors!
little-cullen-girl chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
that was so cute!
Missy Skywalker chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
That was really adorable- so sweet! I loved it!

There's really nothing else to say:

Beautiful, perfect, cute, and those are all of the adjectives I can think of at the moment!
Gleena chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
This story was beautiful. I love Daddy Edward, and I hadn't seen anyone address this missing moment. They do get a *few* happy moments between the end of the honeymoon and the nearly tragic ordeal of childbirth and Bella's human death.

"I’m afraid wet dog overpowers new car smell."

Ha! Even in your fics Jake is abusing Edward's cars. Rose is Rose, very prickly. I liked it.

You made me really want Esme to see Edward happy around pregnant Bella, but they don't get back in time, do they. How sad.

The piano scene was sweet, Edward giving Bella the love she needs and helping out with baby. And being inspired enough to compose a new lullaby.

"… Suddenly, the anguish that Carlisle and Esme had felt at my rebelliousness felt more real than ever before, as had their forgiveness."

Parenthood/maturity does make our own parents sacrifices so much more real. I'm glad you put that in.
FallingStar95 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
I love this story! I also love Introducing Renesmee, and I love how you paired them into one another. Your stories just make my day better! :)
ArwenGranger chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Another lovely fluff! I loved Rosalie's reaction when she found out Edward let Jake take the Vanquish.
Just Another Phase chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Oh! I loved this! This could have and SHOULD HAVE been within the pages of BD! Wonderful! Thank you so much for this!
kellneriner chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Very well written! In character too! :D
ifeelsoawesome chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
more plz i love it
Karibbean chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
Awe! That was so sweet! And just fits perfectly for that time period in the story! Well done!
KxTx chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
:)

That was nice.

Very sweet.

-Kt.
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
That was beautiful.
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