Reviews for No Kage: The Shadow
61394 chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
your a jerk
Konoha's Black Dragon chapter 5 . 12/19/2012
not sure how this is a complete story...
Time Sea Sky Primordial chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
I was expecting that
Sinister01 chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
Nice Faction hope u update soon. but i dont read An ( if you do write them) will the be only a nary/yugito or a naru/harem.
NaruCrazy chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Man your timeline and other stuff is fucked up...
naruto number 1 fan chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
you got da fight scene from dbz when ssj4 gogeta vs omega shenron
Sandaime Hokage chapter 5 . 12/22/2011
Interesting fic shame you have abandoned it.

Peace Out

Sandaime Hokage
jh831 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
good chapter. I enjoyed the V for Vendetta segment, an exellent addition
Owlbear chapter 5 . 12/1/2010
a nice story, i'm a little confused with how old the charecters are u call hinata "preteen" yet it has been 4years since the wave mission? it's confusing i think i may not have read the first chapter or just cann't rember it as for currency what are you using? at some point durring the chapter you refer to cash as "ryo" wich doesn't exsist in RL but at another point you refer to a reward in dollars... can you please refer to one type of currency wether real or not wont realy matter then but i'm guessing your from america, cause of your refrence to dollars although many other places use them as well it IS the most common known. you ocasionaly miss out words from a sentance which can be a pain :P it's a good story and it has been quite fun to read otherwise :3
AR 1993 chapter 5 . 7/26/2010
hey man ar here if possible can you update this story another excellant a dimond in a haystack or some thing anyway update please
Hinata-Chan 111 chapter 5 . 5/25/2010
it was nice on the part of where naruto would teach hinata the defence ablity. however, there should be some moves to attack if there was an opening. if it was absolut defence, you would need another style to hit your opponent if there was an opening right. good luck and Ja ne
Reality Illusionary chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
No kage shadow hm... Interesting story . I like this story even naruto pairing with the two tailed is good.i won't lie I was hoping naruto would sleep with both yugito and anko. The uchiha did he get the curse mark. Does he have a new team mate is he or she sai? Um what rank is the peoples in konoha did they change.. How strong is naruto.. I like this so awesome plz continue or email if you Need any help with ideas I help.

Ja ne

hopeless45
TheWiseGuy chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
Yea... I thought this was OK, until the threesome. I'll stop reading here.
Kimi chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
Lame. -_-

This fic is just another teen wank fic after all.
Zeb chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
I think you forgot who the Hokage is here, particularly the Council meeting No Kage. Sarutobi was being ordered around by Danzo - it shouldn't be like that.
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