Reviews for Betrayed
Chasing Liquor chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Nice little piece. Olivia's perspective is interesting. Because she's not innocent or clean herself, when Vic talks about needing immunity for cutting a couple corners, she's thinking it's something relatively minor in the grand scheme of things, comparable to her small indiscretions. But she couldn't be more wrong. Anyway, you've written a nice look at her internal machinations.
Vanus Empty chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Beautiful, a wonderful look into Olivia's head. (Sorry if you get an alert that says I added this to my story alerts. I hit the wrong thing.)
Yammy1983 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
great story! I really can't imagine what olvia must have felt like during vics confession but your story comes as near as it gets :-)