Reviews for Dream Walker
jk chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
shes getting sympathy from his mom cause she "loved" him wonder what the mom would think of this "love" if she knew rose was cheating on her son the whole time...well some of the time and that she let a dude fuck her the day after he supposed "love" died. I bet her mom would slap a hoe.
jk chapter 13 . 5/29/2014
I think its kinda wrong that rose lost her virginity like a day after dimitri died, seems disrespectful ya know. I don't know about you or anyone else but I think sex scenes should be in the guys pov...its hotter that way lol
jk chapter 12 . 5/29/2014
how does it feel to have a man you loved die knowing you were cheating on him? That's gotta suck rose better hope Adrian doesn't die to...and that he doesn't find out you cheated on him out there on the field whore
jk chapter 10 . 5/29/2014
I have only read half this chapter and im confused. I thought rose loved Adrian and wanted to be with him. But shes kissing dimitri and telling him she loves him just as much as he loves her...she just figured out yesterday that she loves Adrian and shes already cheating on him. What a flippant whore rose is!
shes with dimitri then cheats on him with Adrian then cheats on Adrian with dimitri then cheats on dimitri with Adrian then she gets back with Adrian and cheats on him again with dimitri. Does the Rose in this story even know what love is? She obviously doesn't love Adrian or dimitri enough to be faithful and honestly it would serve her right if they both ditched her ass and got with woman that knew how to be loyal and faithful.
jk chapter 9 . 5/29/2014
Ok this isn't really a flame just a comment! I was thinking it was weird that you said the new spirit users name was exotic. Catrina is exotic? I've known a lot of catrinas...this has nothing to do with your story but they were all whiny little bitches lol. Don't get mad if you read this and you know one or are one...I don't know you, you may not be a whiny bitch im just saying that all the ones I have known were...its kinda weird really.
jk chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
ive liked everything up till now but rose fell to the floor in a ball and started crying? why? shes already killed so why have her freak out like that? I think it makes her seem like a pussy. They've been learning how to kill since they were kids and like I said shes already fought them soooo ya
jksdl chapter 13 . 3/20/2014
well that lemon sucked...he pushed in then rose was like "when it was over" and all Adrian said was are you glad I was your first? that's it! prick
fdg chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
that's sooo fucking stupid. why did she even bother with Adrian in the first place if all she wanted was the Russian? why was she like whats his problem? hmm I don't know rose maybe cause your kissing dimitri while your dating Adrian...ya you stupid cunt you cheated on him and then acted like it never happened...stupid whore
hh chapter 13 . 2/23/2014
The lemon was good until u said and when it was it just started then bam done
hella whitlock chapter 14 . 2/19/2014
Man, for like 3-4 chapters I was just going what the hell over and over, I'm so glad it ended with AdrianxRose though!
hella whitlock chapter 4 . 2/19/2014
Wow, that slut.
me chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
what in the hell did we need a new girl for? im confused
me chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
soooo dimitri doesn't like rose in this one? im confused
Jasmine-Dec31 chapter 14 . 1/10/2011
great! ]
Jasmine-Dec31 chapter 13 . 1/10/2011
cute. ]
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