|Reviews for Empress in the shadows|
| LordRahl80 chapter 6 . 9/10
The all female Jaffa is starting to look a bit strange. Inmate Simpsons before when she was limited in numbers at this point it comes off as more disdain for men, Plus I would think she would want to start building up her population and you can't really do that without both genders.
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/27
| grovepjp chapter 27 . 8/11
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/20
Please keep writing, this is pretty good.
| Tactition101 chapter 23 . 4/28
I noticed you have a predilection for Fire Emblem names, any reason for that?
| Centh97 chapter 27 . 4/9
please update this story
| LostCriesofTime chapter 1 . 3/29
I really like what you have here with this first chapter but I do have a question: why would the nameless goa'uld who implanted Lilith into Maya would make a comment like "Lilith and Maya; it is strangely fitting. I approve." when to the goa'uld the hosts are below nothing in their minds and wouldn't even warrant having their names learned?
I liked the meditation scene where they seemed to bond a bit and I like the fact you're playing it realistic with Lilith still wanting her own empire, as a goa'uld would. I am intrigued to see if she will fall prey to the temptation of the sarcophagus and also whether she will feel affection for any fellow goa'uld with all the complex emotions and situations that would bring.
I'm so glad this is such a long fic, I look forward to reading it every so often :D
| sharpzism chapter 27 . 2/8
I think that you sholud when you get to sg1 you sholud have a thing were they start helping out the goa'uld as they are pretending to be good and have sg1 debate if they are doing the right thing. It may not work with your plans but its a suggestion.
| BloodKingX chapter 27 . 1/29
You couldnt even be bothered to put out a half assed chapter?
| himalay1729 chapter 27 . 12/26/2015
awesome.. but would be more awesome if you chose to continue writing this.. :)
| himalay1729 chapter 26 . 12/26/2015
www ooo www
| himalay1729 chapter 25 . 12/26/2015
w o w !
| himalay1729 chapter 8 . 12/26/2015
| himalay1729 chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
| KMF-G chapter 27 . 12/13/2015
At last first male with status of the "captain", but still called dumb and happy with that...
Are you lesbian or feminazi?