Reviews for Chipmunk Chaos
my opinions chapter 1 . 4/7
Tooooo much cussing a little child shouldn't know any of these cusswords and a parent shouldn't be speaking them to and/or in front of a child...this is an awful fanfic.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
This sucked
krypto chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
can you make dave spank simon ?
wandamarie chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
wow that was a good oen thanks
marcen12 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I was laughing my ass off.
xxlovestoriesxxx chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
That was... horrible :'o I could never picture dave that mean and nasty...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hi There This Story Is So Stupid That I Think You like To Use These Bad Words That Are In This Story I REALLY REALLY REALLY HATE IT DON'T EVER WIRTE STORIES LIKE THIS AGINE HAVE A GOOD DAY AND GO FUCK YOUSELF!
MJ dancer and Sonic fan chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Yow, poor Theodore and Dave. I'm glad things worked out for them in the end.
jet12385 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
dam you droped to many f bombs on this story and there was no good plot
DJ Bunny chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Umm... Too much cursing... O_O
PersonalityOfAWriter chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Ummm...what? o_O
Humour Me- Please chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
This is beautiful. You've made writing not be just writing, but rather an actual art that involves nevative and positive space. Your style is simple in prose and a wonder to read, the vague lines between action, thought and dialogue is bent in such a way it's almost tear-worthy. I cried reading this, you must post more.
Ravennight2641 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
... weird... and not in a good way. and i have a fettish usually for these kind of things... but really? just not good and completely out of character. i would give this 5 negative stars if it was an option
SwEeTcAkEz7304 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
How do I put this in a way that will fit the idea of the story?

Oh! I've got it!

THAT WAS FUCKING INSANE AND RANDOM

lol not trying to be mean
chuchu.mmm chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
lol, really weird! That was meant as a joke, right? XD
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