|Reviews for Chipmunk Chaos|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
| krypto chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
can you make dave spank simon ?
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
wow that was a good oen thanks
| marcen12 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I was laughing my ass off.
| xxlovestoriesxxx chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
That was... horrible :'o I could never picture dave that mean and nasty...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hi There This Story Is So Stupid That I Think You like To Use These Bad Words That Are In This Story I REALLY REALLY REALLY HATE IT DON'T EVER WIRTE STORIES LIKE THIS AGINE HAVE A GOOD DAY AND GO FUCK YOUSELF!
| MJ dancer and Sonic fan chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Yow, poor Theodore and Dave. I'm glad things worked out for them in the end.
| jet12385 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
dam you droped to many f bombs on this story and there was no good plot
| DJ Bunny chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Umm... Too much cursing... O_O
| PersonalityOfAWriter chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
| Humour Me- Please chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
This is beautiful. You've made writing not be just writing, but rather an actual art that involves nevative and positive space. Your style is simple in prose and a wonder to read, the vague lines between action, thought and dialogue is bent in such a way it's almost tear-worthy. I cried reading this, you must post more.
| Ravennight2641 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
... weird... and not in a good way. and i have a fettish usually for these kind of things... but really? just not good and completely out of character. i would give this 5 negative stars if it was an option
| SwEeTcAkEz7304 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
How do I put this in a way that will fit the idea of the story?
Oh! I've got it!
THAT WAS FUCKING INSANE AND RANDOM
lol not trying to be mean
| chuchu.mmm chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
lol, really weird! That was meant as a joke, right? XD
| Shadowgate chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
This is a response to the most recent review.
Interesting before I woke up today I thought about this fan fiction story I wrote and how many on FF net have interesting paragraphs on their account pages condemning child abuse, abortion, and gay bashing.
I like your constructive review to say the least and must respond to it.
This story was written fast and heavily focused on abuse. When I was in middle school and high school writing such stories was as natural as breathing and it's just something I can do in a snap. As for it being hard to read I'm trying to adapt to not using script format so that's been an issue for me. I'm a drama major.
To answer your question about hatred I don't hate the chipmunks. I'm not a huge fan but if I hated them I would not have written a fan fiction about them. You're right there were tons of creative ways to have handled this story, no doubt I was in an aggressive mood the day I wrote it.
One last thing, not long ago one person favorited this story. I never thought anyone would and I won't say who though.