Reviews for Not very trusting
haylE15 chapter 20 . 3/7/2014
With the note on the last chapter, i was afraid this 20th wasn't a real chapter...but i'm glad i was wrong! So tjis was the smut promise by Sakura in the first chapters...a little short but i'm happy she now know about everything :)
I enjoy reading your story even with all the critics i made so thank you
haylE15 chapter 16 . 3/6/2014
I start liking Kiba but now i'm not sure...he seems to actually have feeling for Hinata...and i don't like that x)
Hinata is a jerk huh? Breaking for that...if it was for Sakura not to get hurt yeah but there it doesn't seems she really loves her...
We'll see what will happen!

Ps: Consider not all your readers are english native...i don't know what "ttyl" mean but i guess it doesn't really matters x)
haylE15 chapter 14 . 3/6/2014
Bringing Temari's past like that was harsh...even if she was more than mean u.u
It's sad but i liked the second part of this chapter! And we can feel Sakura's distress at what Hinata's good job :)
haylE15 chapter 12 . 3/5/2014
I quite enjoy reading your story so far but i have some critics:
First i thing you just describe what happen and you should wrote more about the feelings themself. For the moment we know they love each other but it doesn't really feel like it.
That's the first chapter where you wrote more about the cut. I think mutilation is not something you do this fast. I mean you cut fast but then might cry or stand still for some time, lost in thoughts...and you don't develop that.
It'd have been good to know more about Sakura. We kinda know what Hinata though before but when did Sakura start feeling something for her? Or how did she managed with that? But for there still is 8 chapters left so i still hope.

I'm not bothered by the ooc but it's sad you choose Temari to be the bad one here because i like her x)
Anyway thanks!
McFinnagen chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
I was laughing at almost all the parts Temari said, especially the "You two had sex didnt you" and and "im not a lesbian like you!" I frickin love her xDD This is so cute doe xo
McFinnagen chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
Ermahgod so I frickin love this chapter it was all so sweet! How Sakura forgave her and how they kissed and omg xDDD
XxXSaku-ChanXxX chapter 20 . 3/6/2013
This was a great story, I liked it all was an excellent plot and way to structure it :)
Keep writing please :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
OOC much? I see hinata as less sarcastic and more self loathing :/
Crookedstar9 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
I read this many times and I am still not tired of it I LOVE IT!
Sakuya-and-Miku-BFFS chapter 20 . 7/15/2012
Sakuya-and-Miku-BFFS chapter 19 . 7/15/2012
Yay! Ifeel very happy for the both of them
Sakuya-and-Miku-BFFS chapter 10 . 7/15/2012
I love yuri!
Sakuya-and-Miku-BFFS chapter 8 . 7/15/2012
Your chapters r to long
Sakuya-and-Miku-BFFS chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
WTF? Is temari jealous or something
Sakuya-and-Miku-BFFS chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Yay love this story
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