|Reviews for Sleepless|
| Laura of Maychoria chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Great story! I loved your descriptions, could really feel the pain and anxiety and even a bit of horror at what Dean (and by extension, Sam) was going through. Almost laughed out loud at Dean picturing himself as his favorite pitcher. :D Somehow adorable in the middle of all that power.
| hpsupernaturalfan chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
I liked this story. I also liked the fact the you mention Numbers. I watch that show too and sometimes when Charlie speaks he's more confusing than Sam is sometimes, of course Sam isn't a math genius, just an everyday genius.
| may7fic chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I've had this story bookmarked for ages, wanting to wait until I had a quiet evening to delve into it, knowing I'd come away from it feeling full and sated and content as can be.
You didn't disappoint, girl! *g* I just loved this story! As always, your characterizations were spot on, the dialogue perfect. You channel both boys so very well!
I loved the feel of this story too, every line was wonderfully rich and descriptive without ever falling into 'purple'. It just had a richness to it that made the reading experience wholly pleasurable and reminded me once again why I enjoy your writing so much :).
| brihana25 chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
I just have to say that your writing is amazing. You've got the boys' voices down so perfectly - their emotions, their love for each other, their speech patterns - everything. Your plots are simply fantastic, fresh and original. Your writing style is so smooth and flows so well, and every word is perfect.
Thank you so much for doing what you do.
| Mei chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I was completely mesmerized, thank you so much for a really great story, wonderfully told.
| xXThedoctorxX chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
This was a very well done story, i loved it
i seemed to like hurtdean stories...does that make me bad? lol
| bhoney chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
For some reason, I love the idea of Dean with insomnia. I dunno, probably says something about me, right? LOL But I liked it! Not enough insomnia fics out there. And I especially liked how you extended it long enough to show the long-term effects of not sleeping, then added in not being able to eat or drink. Very nice! Maybe I should seek therapy, eh? LOL
Loved that Dean could tell Sam was watching him in the car, even with his eyes closed, and in the room. And that Sam made him lay down at least, and then fell asleep and his head ended up on Dean's shoulder. *snort* I can just picture Dean's face.
Great description: "ugly, harsh, a malicious cadence of rising and falling syllables, old and rank, scraping across his mind like nails on rusted metal".
This made me giggle: “Nice to know at least part of me can still sleep, huh?”
I really loved this. Loved determined, protective Sam, loved Dean taking out the sorcerer on his own turf. Loved Sam using his blood to bind Dean to the living. Great fic, very well done, just as enjoyable the second read. I'm favoriting this!
| Kritty chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
That was a very very great story, I love it! Poor Dean...(well...I love h/c, espeacially when it's hurt!dean...) I have also sometimes such a insomnia...I hate it so much. but thank god there is no curse I have to suffer from - my god, what a great idea you've had there!
I like your stily of writing, it's all just like the show!
Go on this way!
| Mokibobolink chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Absolutely gorgeous story. Loved how it seemed to start out as simple insomnia. I never thought there was anything else happening. The ritual at the end was great, especially the way Dean fought off the sorcerer. Great work.
| Magnolia Lane chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
I absolutely adored this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| all done chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Great story! I really liked it.
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
This was a wonderful story. I love hurt!Dean stories anyway so this was p-e-r-f-e-c-t. Worth every minute spent reading it and then some.
| Scullspeare chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Loved how Dean's apparent insomnia morphed into something much bigger, and with a supernatural cause. Great pacing too as the curse took hold; the tension really snowballed.
Awesome dynamic between the brothers - you let Dean fall apart physically without making him weak, and I love seeing Sam's strength as he cares for his ailing brother. Yum.
Great Work. Loved it.
| PADavis chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Fantastic - I loved this. The build up of symptoms was unnerving and chilling. Loved the touch of John telling him to go running and not come back until he stopped twitching. A beautifully story, elegantly developed and written. I am so grateful that you posted this. Just fantastic.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Whew! I'm exhausted! This last part with the ritual finally took it all out of me. I'm very content, tho. What a struggle! Poor both boys...one suffering from the curse and the other suffering from his brother's suffering. Oy!
Great story. It sucked me in and held me tight until it was all over. Loved it. Really well done. Thanks for sharing.