Reviews for Extraordinary
Kimkrys chapter 3 . 12/25/2009
weirdo chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
bella can't cry, remember? tears can't come out of her eyes.
isuckatwritingbuticanread chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
pretty damn good
MrsEdwardCullenP chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Cold shower No1! off to read the 2nd chapter...Loved this one
I lost the review button chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
So this is the first porno I've read, and I'm not sure how I'm supposed to critique it. I'll try, anyhow.

First of all, thanks for giving away some stuff in the Twilight series. Remind me to start (and buy) the books soon! :P

So putting aside the good-I mean dirty-part, it's really good. It doesn't sound childish and immature, like you want to get down to business right away (because that would be pedophilistic).
spunkransom9 chapter 3 . 12/26/2008
lmfao, that was hilarous, i found that soo funny. awesome job.
saturdaynightwrists chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
Beautiful :)

This is going on my favorites list.

97486284956732312323347846 times better than my first lemon...
asf134 chapter 3 . 12/25/2008
okie! i could wait!
asf134 chapter 2 . 12/25/2008
asf134 chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
i think i luv this story! and ur other one, i fell in luv with it already!
jennbear chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
OMG! You are right darkxlight, your stories are WAY too MATURE for me! I think i've gone blind. What's a "clit" or a "nub" and what's with the "two finger" thing he does to her, and what are the "juices"! besides that... you definitely have a knack for writing. you have fans that Love this. CONTINUE! WHOO... but I will stop here...
Miss-Truffle chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
FallingXXXForever chapter 3 . 12/2/2008
Nuu! Hurry and write this one already! XD
FallingXXXForever chapter 2 . 12/2/2008
i luv tl chapter 3 . 11/30/2008
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