|Reviews for Tangled Up in Green|
| RexCaldoran chapter 45 . 10/4
oh i know this dream ;D i might read about it somewhere else ;D
| RexCaldoran chapter 16 . 10/2
goddess i always rolling giggleing on the bed when I read the muffin part xD
| Vashne chapter 40 . 9/6
There was actually an entire story arc that showed Ron as a superb cook.
| Anon chapter 36 . 8/29
Too much fucking abby, this was going so well until you added the OC donut steel
| Jack139 chapter 8 . 8/2
This is the 28th time reading this story and in my opion it is the best of all the the Kigo stories and there are some darn good ones out there this one has test of time quality
| TimeMachine chapter 18 . 7/30
Worth noting, you shouldn't really use a hot tub while pregnant, especially during early development. Just saying.
| Jesseburnett chapter 11 . 7/27
loving the story so far. the only complaint is that they went from chaste kissing without tongue, straight to jumpin in the sack together. some build up definitely would have prolonged the romance of it. oh well it's rare that a story is perfect, a lot of other aspects of it are definitely great. thx for the story
| Jesseburnett chapter 5 . 7/27
this story is so much better than 'a small possibility' its not even funny. lovin it. tysm for writing it!
| Joshua560 chapter 45 . 5/2
starvinglunatic walking the line reference?
| Teletubby2015 chapter 47 . 7/12/2016
He was her best friend since Preschool
| TheAmbiguousFool chapter 12 . 5/19/2016
I'm sorry, but I had to stop reading after chapter 11. Please take the following as criticism and not hurtful comments. This was indeed an interesting concept of a story and I tried to give it a chance, but the numerous grammatical errors, type-Os, and the style of writing sadly took me out of the story. The characters are unlike themselves. For example, Anne would never call her own sons 'tweebs.' Shego is an accredited teacher, total badass, and definitely not stupid. She's known for her attitude and fiesty comebacks which she nearly had none of in this story. Even if she's no longer a villain, she'd still have her personality. There was too much 'and stuff' written; 'and stuff' should be actual words or excluded when used outside the context of speech. I normally don't write reviews, but I was very interested in this story and I felt there was a lack of effort. I'm sorry.
| Baby-Maraj chapter 38 . 5/4/2016
It sounds like Drakken but he's come too close to succeeding so can it really be him?
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/26/2016
oh come on, closer than ron, exaggeration much? but hey its ur fic, just trying to help in decreasing the ooc ness
| moviescene chapter 55 . 2/20/2016
This is a fabulous story, thank you for sharing it with us. I hope the sequel is here somewhere, I'm anxious to know what trouble the famous couple and their bodyguard/nanny get in and out of ;)
| Jack139 chapter 17 . 2/14/2016
I forgot about the muffins in the bag ha ha ha