Reviews for Destiny and Atonement
Evanlicious chapter 2 . 12/6/2008
The opening chapter was really good. The second chapter wasn't as good. I feel like I read your first chapter somewhere else, as if it were written in a game manual, or something. The second chapter just didn't flow very smoothly in comparison. Your use of language and descriptors are very excellent, and I liked the depth of your story, but at the same time there's just a ton of information in the first couple of chapters, making it a bit of an overload.
Mirai Reiko chapter 3 . 12/3/2008
Great chapter! I'm really starting to like this story more than ever now. Can't wait till four days!
Mirai Reiko chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Wow. A Starkiller/OC story. How I've waited for wait for more. :3
Mirai Reiko chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
Can't wait to see more! This is turning out to be very interesting. Best of luck to you!