|Reviews for Eragon Bjartskular|
| Mr. Aleyado chapter 5 . 9/21/2017
Theoretically speaking, seithr oil has quite the pungent smell to it, so it would be hard for Eragon to NOT notice it. Aside from that, and a handful of grammatical mistakes, I really enjoyed your idea of an Eldunari transforming into an egg. Yes, I realizd that I wrote this a whole 5 years after you last updated, but whatever. May your sword stay sharp, and may you soar on dragon wings!
| DragonTemeraire chapter 5 . 1/22/2017
:( it was just getting good :(
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/9/2017
Hai,if you didn't guess already..I am a HUGE Fan of the inheritance series of books and I love this writing to bits.
Lots of spelling errors though...ahh what the hell,who cares about spelling.,not me that's for damn shure.
| flad1221 chapter 5 . 8/17/2016
Good luck attending university, hope you achieve your goal(s).
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/26/2016
Arya isn't like that.
| Critic chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
Not possible for him to get so close, and if he did, Eragon or Saphira would know...
and also, Eragon would KNOW if it was poisoned, and he knows what to do against it.
remember, it smells like painful death?
| doge chapter 3 . 7/23/2016
HEAVY editing needed...
| bloodwolf1235 chapter 5 . 4/16/2016
Can we please have more
| Gamerbros481 chapter 2 . 1/4/2016
Very good not gonna lie.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
Nice cliffhanger. I like it.
| Jragon chapter 5 . 11/12/2015
You should continue, there is no other story like how this one came to be and you have good writing
| snowbeard3 chapter 5 . 9/2/2015
you really should write more you are very good at it, but it is understandable if you feel like its a chore to write. inspiration is a hard thing to come by at times, but still love to see more of this story
| Alex chapter 5 . 7/25/2015
R u dead
| Baedragon26589 chapter 5 . 6/8/2015
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/7/2015