|Reviews for and the two of them lived|
| benign intent chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
This really deserves a note, much as I seldom drop reviews.
I admire it; this piece speaks to the (non)writer me, the oft-dreaming me, the wish-I-coulds of anyone, and fits really well in the viewpoints and behavior of these characters.
[And where is my supportive Duck before I destroy my rubbish words?]
I'm thrown into turmoil with the parting statement; within this context, I doubt the truism. !
How can I? Yet, not needing to be said in words? If I could just hold it to be true that Fakir and Duck have a 'happy ending,' why do I periodically read anything I come across that might finally give it to them?
This grants me a scene I can find better closure with, when I want it. Thank you for the words.
| Chu-Chu chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I read in an earlier review: and the important part is that they LIVED. hahahahaha! anyway, I really like that, it is so vauge-ish and yet descriptive enough that you can tell exactly what's going on, without getting hung up on details. Also, if 'happily ever after' was written, I don't believe that life as they know it would be normal. And with that, I'm adding it to my bookmarks. Great job! :D
| LunaSphere chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
So simple and lovely and perfect. Much enjoyed.
| Co-Star chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Ah! This is cute and satisfying! I'd love to see a ending like this in the series!
I really liked the development of the text!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
| Moon Shadow Magic chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Oh, well done!
| Nanenna chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
So like the ending to Ever After: "the important thing, gentlemen, is that they LIVED." This was just what I wanted! I had just finished re-watching the series and I wanted to something sweet and fluffy where Fakir got Ahiru the girl back and they could have a quiet life together dancing ballet! Yay!
| Alatus chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Aw! This just gets cuter every time I read it. _ Hurray for Fakir/Ahiru! I know I said this before, but wonderful one shot! Great job! Two thumbs up or feathers depending on your species _ Great job once again and looking forward to seeing more fanfics!