Reviews for The Debtor's Intent
Caramelized chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
...this is incredibly cute and adorable.
it's so sweet and just dsjfasf innocent.
good job :D
SI5EVA chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I'm just going to go off and read all your ShikaIno fics now. Because honestly, you write them so wonderfully.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
So cute. Like ridiculously so. They were so adorable and in character and just perfect for each other already. Great job :).

PS: your second paragraph lapses into third person while the rest of the story is written in first but it was great nonetheless!
calico.snails chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
This is beyond adorable.

I like how simple and sweet it is. You wrote the narrative so well and so in character that I knew from the beginning it was Shikamaru.
always-kh chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
so truly cute. awww. and it sounds like him well a chibi version and it's so cute.
Wind Blown Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Alright, I generally don't read Shika/Ino fics, but I'm sure glad I read this one! I loved how Ino came to "protect Shikamaru from the monsters," too cute!
Glitters and Sparkles chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Adorable! x3 very cute. Good job! (;
Useless-Materia chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
So very very very precious. I love the ending especially.
ArAshiMitArAshi chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
cute. i love fics with ino and shikamaru as little children
Elephantie chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
so cute!

aw shikaino is love!
hungrytiger11 chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
too cute! Love the voice in this.
anthropomorphychan chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Lol. I love Shika! It's amazing how you wrote it in a voice that sounds just like him ... Nice job!
crimsonstain chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Aw, how cute!
thebookishone chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
aw, this was so cute. i love the young shikamaru :)
kiwi4me chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
aw this was ADORABLE!

too cute for words!

good job!
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