|Reviews for Pickles and Cheese|
| merryrogue chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
aw. I love kiotr fluff. keep it up!
| XnTrK1 chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
Omg. Yes, my teeth are hurting from the sugary-ness of this story! It's just too cute! And you did an excellent job of capturing the characters' personas.
| Xakko chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
very believable little fluff you've written here - Peter's concern over the scene in the attic would certainly have led to a conversation we didn't see, and this fits nicely in that hole in continuity.
I think you missed an "I" when Kitty says “Paint me? Aren’t okay this color?”
| SSG Michael B Jackson chapter 2 . 11/27/2008
(Teehee. Are your teeth hurting?)
A little, maybe, but in a good way. Just the sheer nostalgia is knocking me flat here; this was the era that I started reading the X-Men, and I'll never be convinced that anything they've done since was an 'improvement'. Thank you for stirring up the old memories, and I'd love to see more of this.
| Author376 chapter 2 . 11/27/2008
These are both adorable. I love how you captured Kitty's sweet nervousness in the first chapter, and then captured the innocense of Illyana's childhood, prior to Limbo, so perfectly with that lovely request for a puppy. She's a little girl from a farm, of course she'd want a puppy!