Reviews for Pickles and Cheese
merryrogue chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
aw. I love kiotr fluff. keep it up!
XnTrK1 chapter 2 . 11/29/2008

Omg. Yes, my teeth are hurting from the sugary-ness of this story! It's just too cute! And you did an excellent job of capturing the characters' personas.

More, please!

Xakko chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
very believable little fluff you've written here - Peter's concern over the scene in the attic would certainly have led to a conversation we didn't see, and this fits nicely in that hole in continuity.

I think you missed an "I" when Kitty says “Paint me? Aren’t okay this color?”
SSG Michael B. Jackson chapter 2 . 11/27/2008
(Teehee. Are your teeth hurting?)

A little, maybe, but in a good way. Just the sheer nostalgia is knocking me flat here; this was the era that I started reading the X-Men, and I'll never be convinced that anything they've done since was an 'improvement'. Thank you for stirring up the old memories, and I'd love to see more of this.
Author376 chapter 2 . 11/27/2008
These are both adorable. I love how you captured Kitty's sweet nervousness in the first chapter, and then captured the innocense of Illyana's childhood, prior to Limbo, so perfectly with that lovely request for a puppy. She's a little girl from a farm, of course she'd want a puppy!