Reviews for Mild Influence
Devin Trinidad chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Near in a French accent. What?

Anyways, the characterizations for the three were spot on. Their thoughts on this situation was completely believable and I could imagine this happening within the series. I especially liked how you included the lesser known characters-kinda and Roger. Those two completely added to the story. Anyways, that last line...

I wonder what happened. ;)
Castiel666xD chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
i must insist you keep going with this story! i absolutely love this! :)
Camorra chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
"Oh no, a nuclear explosion!"

I had to laugh at the irony of that one. Beside the humor, the story was well written and nicely done. Good job!
xXxMayonakaxXx chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I found this really funny :) although they all got the flu. I just wanna say something though... If death note was real Matt, Mello, Near and L would be mine! - that is all
Snoaz chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I didn't really know what to expect when reading the summary, but you managed to make something as random as the flu into a very enjoyable, very endearing, and very ic-story.

My favourite part was probably the beginning of section five, since that was /so/ Mello. But all was very really in-character and nice to read, really.

noisee chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
That was perfect and adorable and better characterized than the series.

Can I read it again!
great gospel chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I think you captured all of the characters quite well. Very amusing, and nice job.
KarixTakayuya chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
"Oh no. A nuclear explosion." XD Awesome story!
magdilen chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Good job.
Tsuki No Shuurai chapter 1 . 3/29/2009 captured Mello perfectly. Again, nicely done-all of the stuff of yours that I've read has entertained me very much, and this is no exception. Good work!
naonaonao chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This is awesome. You are awesome. Your awesomeness causes my soul to explode and be brung back to life because of how awesome this is.

PERFECT FLAWLESS AMAZING FANTASTIC characterization, advanced and amazing writing style, lovely length and division of each scene.

I love this. A lot.
Sarapsys chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Oh God, I thought I would die when I read the line "Oh no. A nuclear explosion." I can just picture him saying something like that XD Very cute, in character, and a fun little snapshot of life at Wammy's.
Ninja Basket chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
This was a great story! You really have the personalities of the characters down. Great story idea, loved Near and Mello.
Coryx chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
"ignoring the fact that his clogged nose made it taste no better than paper."

Would just like to comment that food, to me, has no different taste whatsoever whether I have a stuffy nose or not. -shrug- maybe to some people it does.
HollyJollyXmas chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Funny and adorable at the same time! No more chocolate for Mero-chan.
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