Reviews for Dance! Dance! Fall In Love!
demongirl149 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I love the ending! "What's that?" LOL! Oh, Lettuce!
DarkAngel21 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Snicker giggle Bwahaha! I don't get it. Jk jk jk hahaha!
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Surrel and HILARIOUS, Jazz-chan! xD
MetallicBlueFrog chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Haha! Nice. I like how it ended. Very funny! Can't wait to read more!
True Colours chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Wow, Lettuce is naive. That was a bit random.

This was quite sweet, but you're using the characters' names too often. For example, 'Pai wore a fancy looking tux. Pai lightly smiled and walked up to Lettuce. Once Pai reached her, he gently slid his arms around her slim waist.' The second two Pai's could have been replaced with he. Usign the names too much spoils the flow of the writing.

Promising oneshot though, Keep it up!
FictionalSandbox chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Mph! WTH? Very sweet, but... er. yes, well...

very fluffy, sweet! Paixlettuce forever! XD
Abbie8290 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
OMG! So cute! And the ending was hilarious!
LittleGreenTiger chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
LOL luv the ending the story is sop cute
Sunset Love chapter 1 . 12/28/2008

pai got a boner. XD

ahahahahahahahhahaha! i just love it! magnificent
MewRebecky chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
OMG LOL nice story

BEc xx
XXX3XXX chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
omg i cryed wiv ;laughter at the end! :)

there was a few spelling mistakes in there but it doesn't really matter. i got what you ment. nice one shot though.

the only problem i saw was it was a little bit short. if you write one shots in the future then i wud try to make them a little bit longer. apart from that it was brill. i hope you keep writing, your really good.
Fantasyfan4ever chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Hehe, adorable oneshot! Aw, Lettuce is so innocent. Nicely done!
lustofficial chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Yay that was so cute!
Tuliharja chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Okay, that end of story was totally in wrong place...Otherwise it was too sugary with my mind. xP
Obliviousrose chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
So kawaii! I laughed at the end.