|Reviews for Eternal Dawn|
| nikkijoy chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Hey, just started this, pretty good so far!
| marie1976 chapter 52 . 8/26/2009
i loved this story it was good
| o2b18 chapter 5 . 8/17/2009
Oh I like that vindictive twist!
| Eyes of Topaz chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Absolutely loved this story. I actually like the storyline better than Breaking Dawn...no offense to Stephenie because I loved all 4 books but this just flowed better for me than the whole "Renesmee" story.
Look forward to reading more of your fic! Thank you!
| KristenLynn chapter 51 . 8/5/2009
Great read. . . . Read this whole book in a day (while at work, no less)! I liked that it was a completely different take on what could be the ending of the Twilight Saga (though I don't know if Edward really would have bit Bella in a fit of passion-but I know it was necessary for this story). Keep up the good work!
| Suzy Q Something chapter 42 . 7/20/2009
I laughed into hysterics when I read this,
"Edward was glad she wasn’t angry at him! From his experience of Russian women, they weren’t ones you wanted to cross..."
thats just great!
| Just Erin chapter 51 . 7/15/2009
It was an absolutely beautiful story - I loved it. And though at times (especially the beginning) I felt like things were moving too fast or too piece-meal - by the end I couldn't stop clicking the next chapter button (even at work). Thank you for writing a beautiful end for Bella and Edward - I much preferred it to Stephenie's Dawn.
| beaushan chapter 51 . 7/7/2009
Just so you know. Joey Tribbiani got that particular phrase from URBAN America. He did not originate it but he did pull it off quite well!
| Stillheartdeep chapter 18 . 7/5/2009
How can you say that she won't remember? She is a SM vampire. They can think of many things all at once with photographic recall.
| louisianagirl900 chapter 22 . 7/3/2009
This is a really interesting story. At first I wasn't sure I would like it because Edward seemed to be acting like a 17 year old...but once I accepted the initial premise...it was easy to get into it.
| WAlove chapter 51 . 7/2/2009
Oh, this chapter was so good, definitely my favourite. The wedding was absolutely great.
When I got to the "How you doin'" I fell off the chair, rofl.
I haven't read "Breaking Dawn" and for a while I don't think I'm going to read it ("Eclipse", with all the Jacob-Bella kissing issue pissed me off at the end, and other readers' reviews aren't exactly great)and I really enjoyed reading this story.
Thanks for making Bella deal with Vicomte on her own and not letting her be always the damsel in distress of the situation.
I hope you don't mind me underlining this, but I'm italian and there are a few errors with the italian dialogues (I'm guessing you used an automatic translator).
| EC111 chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
Holy crap! This is already intense and it's only chapter two!
| EC111 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Had I known that would be the last time that I would ever see Charlie again, I would have kissed him goodbye. But as it was, I was running late.
WHAT? Okay, that's really crazy. Now you have me wanting to read more.
| kneon chapter 52 . 6/21/2009
Great story. I really won't have rated a M though. Pretty tame compared to others that I have read.
I await for more stories.
| kneon chapter 13 . 6/18/2009
Okay I read chapter 13 and you made me cry. I can't stand them being apart. I feel like I am reliving New Moon all over again and being so upset. I had to cheat and read the end of the last chapter so I know that they get back together b/c if they weren't I was going to stop reading. I did the samething with New Moon it drove me insane I asked everyone to please tell me that they get back together b/c I was going to stop reading the book right then.
This just means you are a great writer.