Reviews for Eternal Dawn
EC111 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Had I known that would be the last time that I would ever see Charlie again, I would have kissed him goodbye. But as it was, I was running late.

WHAT? Okay, that's really crazy. Now you have me wanting to read more.
kneon chapter 52 . 6/21/2009
Great story. I really won't have rated a M though. Pretty tame compared to others that I have read.

I await for more stories.
kneon chapter 13 . 6/18/2009
Okay I read chapter 13 and you made me cry. I can't stand them being apart. I feel like I am reliving New Moon all over again and being so upset. I had to cheat and read the end of the last chapter so I know that they get back together b/c if they weren't I was going to stop reading. I did the samething with New Moon it drove me insane I asked everyone to please tell me that they get back together b/c I was going to stop reading the book right then.

This just means you are a great writer.
ldybug1701 chapter 51 . 6/14/2009
I am so glad I came across this story. Breaking Dawn was such a disappointment and didn't fit at all with the other three books. I just spent 2 days straight reading this. I couldn't put my computer down. This is the story that should have been told. I was so suspenseful and even had some of the romance in it. Thank you so much for writing this story, I really enjoyed it.
Madison.Blk chapter 39 . 6/4/2009
Yay, Jacob! Imprinting on someone who's not already in a relationship and not a child! Whoo!

I hope this girl doesn't turn out to be crazy or weird...
saraamin chapter 51 . 6/2/2009
HAHAHAHAHHAHAH man havent laught this much in days! thank you for having such a fun Felix and Emmett! love them even if they are pretty stupid for being vamps :P

gosh the end that beloved end hahaha never finishing Edward disagreeing.

can say so much of this chapter, i can go on and on but its a little late now and i think i want to sleep...?

so... THANK YOU! for this amazing cruel, cool and most stunning story of yours :D thank you for writing and for sharing amongst us fans :D
saraamin chapter 50 . 6/2/2009
oh my heart is aching of happiness i guess but man this chapter wow even more heartblowing then the previous. haha

but i dont like the idea of the wedding being so soon so fast and so rushing but i get it to save Jakes life one more time buhu

love the conversation between Edward and Bella in this chapter hilarious but still hihi

sweet that both Edward and Demetri said NO at the same time...

i can imagine how much fod Alice will make just for three humans haha so delicious i want to be there on sunday.

oh cant wait till the wedding seeing Edward with tuxedo right? and Bella with her dress wow dreaming away...
saraamin chapter 49 . 6/2/2009
yeah cant they have a nice talk? or?

i dont understand edward no sorry i mean i dont want to understand edward why is he always against Bella always! man that man goes on my nerves... :P lots of hugs
saraamin chapter 48 . 6/2/2009
wow im astonished this chapter so many pieces and so many feelings.

All from Charlie and Renee to Bellas memory of what had happen in France.

I like it that Charlie is trying to see them as vampires but feel sorry that by human instincs he feel that he has to protect himself from his own daughter. He tries to see it as a fact, but has so hard with that, he is great for trying.

Renee, who wasnt with Charlie in Sweet Home, has the difficulty to take in that her daughter is a vampire.

Im so impressed of Heidi and Demetri that they helped Bella, that they didnt betray her that day, they staid behind and helped her from being a monster, no a demon for the rest of her eternity. But most of all im impressed of Bella and the love they have between each other. Bella for resisting and remembering Edward, their love for being so powerful and so strong and so amazing.

Hope you have a wonderful day :D lots of hugs
saraamin chapter 47 . 6/2/2009
huuh what happened? Renee? Charlie? the government? haha
saraamin chapter 46 . 6/2/2009
YES yes yes! finally or?
saraamin chapter 45 . 6/2/2009
oh wow what a battle what a man! must read more :D
saraamin chapter 44 . 6/2/2009
sad that Renee wasnt there but in the same time it was good because that woman is just like Alice they cant shut their mouthes hihi

oh i wish that Charlie will see Bella one more time, feel sad for him... :(

Love that lover of Jake, Tatiana, she is so cool an alpha and Edward making fun of Jake hahaha Jake should someday take payback for that :P

hope the next chapter will end up good : )
saraamin chapter 43 . 6/2/2009
i believe i start to like Demetri... he seems to be a good vamp, even if he has drunk from thousand of thousand of humans.

wow this is really awesome Bella fighting, haha Edward always protecting her and now she is supposed to save the world hihi that is just so cool

it feels like i have read this story before. i started to read fan fics around New Year and in the beginning i didnt add stories to favorites and now i get that feeling that i have been reading this one but the best thing is that i dont remember :D
saraamin chapter 42 . 6/2/2009
haha gosh i love those two boys now after so many years they have ended up in the same boat damn man this is getting more and more dramatic as it goes on wow :D
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