Reviews for Sweet Kiss
Master z chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Random chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
rugspuppy chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
YOU had to use growlithes when May and max got mad and you spelled it wrong but it's ok :D nice story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
SonicBlueBlur chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Aww! Ash's denseness is always so funny and cute! But the most cute thing is seeing how Ash slowly realizes that May is important to him, and that he's in love with her. Really nice story!
MEECHINAGO chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
So cute... -_-
TheRedQuill chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Cute ending. Really liked it. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I thought this story was very cute! o
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Nice Wow I thought the fanfic about ash and misty was good but this is amazing i read another about theres a movie about may & Ash almost kissed in a movie under a mistletoe but were interuted by brock cooking them food.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
nataly0207 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
it's a wery good tory!(i reed the fake story to)
sir.aaron.adv chapter 1 . 8/2/2011

that was a really gr8 story; there were a few errors(like 'zigzangoon'), but then again, no one is perfect.

am sorry to hear that someone had stolen it. that is so wrong...

keep writing gr8 SatoHaru fics like this one, i really loved it.
RANDOM GIRL chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
i really truly feel soo sorry for you come on someone stole this wonderful story :'( now thats just sad...
THE L33T SOLDIER chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Dont worry, Ill make sure he doesnt steal any more stories. *pumps shotgun*
advanceshippinftw chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
1.) I read the fake story, and they corrected your errors. I know what he did was wrong, but you have to respect that he didnt copy it exactly. Also, fake raevell changed zigzagoon to nidoran. 2.)You spelled zigzagoon and exeggcute wrong. 3.) You should make an Obliviashipping fic!
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