Reviews for You Think I'm Dead
Fried-Chicken-Nisha chapter 20 . 4/12/2013
I burst out laughing when Tony said McGroom! Lovely story!
Ceggle143 chapter 20 . 11/8/2012
I like the phrasing of Rule 12 exception. :)
vegasman83 chapter 20 . 8/14/2012
only abby would wanna get married on halloween, so many emotions in this story & abby & mcgee both in that much pain,glad 4 the happy ending
ghostadventuresX3 chapter 20 . 5/31/2011
oh my gawd! i am crying my eyes out right now! you are soo amazing! ur such a genius! and i love the song! five stars!

3 3 3 :) :):D :D :D :D :D :D :D
FirePhoenix97 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
In this fic 'Probie' finally became Agent McGee - his confidence/respect went up and he got together with Abby - YAY!

He did change but mostly his shyness I think at the end he wasn't afraid to show serious emotion - Great job Raccon!

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FirePhoenix97
Broken Kindle chapter 20 . 9/18/2010
I just sat and read this all in one sitting. It was brilliantly written, and such a geat idea :)

I adored the ending too 'McGROOM!' - that and Bert 'annoucing his arrival' gave me a good laugh. Thanks for sharing!
KochamQue chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
You're GOOD! I acually feel Mcgee's frustration!

Can't waite to reade the rest!

Keep writing pretty PLEASE!
TwistedRocketPower chapter 20 . 9/6/2010
So good! I wanted it to last longer though! haha I loved the story. I know it's been over a year but maybe a sequel? Anyway, I loved this story! Good job.
Servant05 chapter 6 . 5/29/2010
Okay, questions first then the good stuff.

1. Why would McGee be put immediately into witness protection after just one death threat? Most of the time it's not until an actual attempt on the person's life has taken place, before they are put on.

2. Why would Gibbs not go to McGee's funeral? He went to Kate's and Jenny's and Paula's? Wouldn't it make sense for appearances for him to go?

3. Why would Gibbs call McGee and use his regular name and not the pseudonym he was given? He would be privy to that information as the Team's Boss.

4. Where is Ducky in all of this?

5. A pancake house has a bar? Huh?

6. Why would his editors be calling his new number? Wouldn't they have found out he died and published the book posthumously?

Good stuff time: LOVED IT! I thought it was a great story even with all my questions. Thanks for writing it!
katxopixie chapter 20 . 5/1/2010
Oh my goodness, this was really good :)
GrangerousLiaisons chapter 20 . 4/10/2010
I don't know if I've reviewed this before, but if I have, I just have to say it again... LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!
The HongKonger chapter 20 . 2/7/2010
The ending was so cute. Good story.
smilessss chapter 20 . 2/3/2010
love love loved it! it even made me cry a bit, the ending was good, i hate when it's too mushy but it worked! ]
Danielle chapter 20 . 1/22/2010
THAT WAS FANTASTIC! One of my few favorite McAbby fanfics! Great writing and even greater plot.

Few comments:

1) I cried at the funeral scene. *weep*

2) My heart ached for Tim having his life snatched form him, for Abby having her heart ripped out, and for Gibbs who was agonizing along with everyone else and for blaming himself for it. *hear break*

3) The scene where Abby reads the original end of Rock Hollow and then shredding it was such a tear jerker! That was an incredible painful scene which makes readers just ache with her! *mourn*

4) I love Tony and Ziva's speech at the funeral. That was very heart warming and touching. *sob*

5) Very good capturing their characteristics (some fanfics are so out of character it's a crime). *praise*

WONDERFUL story! Kudos.
kalicious chapter 20 . 1/17/2010
I

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So amazing. I'm gonna make a top ten on my profile and this is going in there.

Not sure which spot, but towards the top.
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