Cliche start

Nice chapter.

However Danzo wouldn't get angry that quickly he rarely shows his emotions.

You should go back and fix the little mistakes in the chapters you had written because now you have a better understanding of the show.

Hyuuga you spelt it as Huuga.

If Naruto's goal ends out to be destroying Hinata you shouldn't use Hinata as a pairing.

Nice chapter.

Itachi and Kisame are both S rank ninja and not double SS rank.

Tobi should not have been a member of Akatsuki now.

Nice chapter.

The very small fight scene was done quite well.

Nice chapter.

Naruto doesn't need to be a part of a village to go on missions also Naruto could just become a mercenary that would fit him much better as you have already established a few trust issues.

One word UPDATE

wow..never would have thought kakuzu would have been able to raise a kid much less naruto.

well now i can say ive read stories where our blond ninja was raised by each of the akatsuki save for Zetsu

xD

keep up the good work

I liked the scene with Akatsuki, the maze of secrets and conspirations among their members is very interesting, and their plans for Naruto have me on edge.

It was fun to see Sarutobi acting all 'I'm the Hokage and you must obey!' at the end of the scene in Konoha. However, the meeting was a bit weird. For example, how did Sarutobi know, before the elders say a word, that the meeting was about Naruto? Also, how come the elders are so interested in finding the boy? If there's some strategic reason, you should explain it better. When they say risky, are they talking about the Akatsuki?

A few details to mention. One, jinchuuriki was properly spelled. Also, I believe two years is a way too excessive time to wait between meetings for the Akatsuki. Even if they are mostly autonomous, and their schedule is slow right now, they should meet at least twice a year for reports and updates, or the organization would crumble.

Finally, you should expand a bit about the members, so that the readers can know whether Orochimaru has already defected or not, and what is the situation with Tobi, since he's not supposed to be a member yet.

Good chapter.

I liked the explanation about why Kakuzu kept Naruto to himself. Simple, but very in character for him. Still, I have to insist that the best place for it would have been in the first chapter, after Kakuzu learnt Naruto's identity.

The training was very interesting, and I liked that Naruto has picked up some traits from Kakuzu, such as the business sense and the liking for money. Very logical, considering his upraising. The battle with Itachi adn Kisame was okay; it could have been a bit longer, but it was correct.

Not a bad beginning, although a bit plain. I have never read a fic with Kakuzu as Naruto's teacher, so that intrigues me.

I see a few details that should be polished. For starters, a better explanation as to why the villagers took Naruto so far, and why did they just leave him there instead of outright killing him.

Also, I think you should erase the detail of Naruto nicking an apple. Even if it's just a piece of fruit, a kid that can steal it so casually should be quite used to stealing, and wouldn't be so fascinated with the pickpocked nor worry about the Hokage's warnings about it.

Next, it's a quite a stretch that Naruto would become such a good and imaginative pickpocketer with just a little speech and practicing on his own. He should have stayed with the thief for a few months, annoying him into giving him more lessons: how to spot where the wallet is, which are the better places and times, how to train your hands to become faster, etc... That way, the idea is better sold to the readers, and it makes for a juicier first chapter.

Finally, how come Kakuzu doesn't take Naruto straight to Pain after learning his name? Is Akatsuki not searching for the tailed demons yet? Do they not know who the vessels are? That point needs to be clarified.

Really nice update! Please update soon! Looking forward to see how the story develops. And I wonder what Danzo is upto. Perhaps he wants to capture Naruto himself lol.

Anyways one line I enjoyed a LOT:

"Get me Kakashi. I want him here yesterday. Inform him that if he is not here postehaste, i will personally burn his icha icha colection and melt down the memorial."

PRICELESS! :D

Nice Update!

Thank you for updating.

Need NaruHina fluff.

Great chapter. Please update soon.

I like the chapter.