Reviews for My Two Loves: Part Two: The Day After
Kim Ginsberg chapter 8 . 8/29/2011
uh oh
Kim Ginsberg chapter 7 . 8/29/2011
oh geez
Kim Ginsberg chapter 6 . 8/29/2011
uh oh
Kim Ginsberg chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
uh oh
Kim Ginsberg chapter 4 . 8/29/2011
oh fuck!
Kim Ginsberg chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Kim Ginsberg chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
oh fuck
Kim Ginsberg chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
love it
Princess Mishawaka chapter 8 . 1/3/2011
Thank you for the best hours of entertainment I have had in quite a while. Your story has everything but especially love.

Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you. Joan
Princess Mishawaka chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
I feel so bad for Jacob. Oh by the way the lemon was really good and I always wonder how Bella can keep from wanting Jacob instead of edward. Jacob is such an "animal"
Princess Mishawaka chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
what did they do to Bella? Where are the guard?
Princess Mishawaka chapter 5 . 1/3/2011
OMG I am so excited. this is really a good action story. The romance is great too but this chase to free Jacob and Bella is extraordinary. You are an excellent writer.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 4 . 1/3/2011
Wasn't Victoria enough? NO, now the Volturi is here to get Bella. She should have stayed a virgin. Since giving it up everybody is after
Princess Mishawaka chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Yes, that's what I want to know...where is Alice and Jasper?
Princess Mishawaka chapter 2 . 1/3/2011
Now I am wondering about Jacob? What does he think about the situation? Next chapter please.
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