|Reviews for The Return of Dani Phantom|
| SpicyTacos chapter 31 . 9/11
As you can see, I'm reading through your stories as I await the next chapter of Phoenix Phantom. It's really interesting to see how you've developed as an author, and how you've developed these characters from here leading until there.
Nice story, I loved the plot line for the most part. The Danielle forming with Danny was a little bit too weird for me personally, but I can go with it. I did really enjoy the development of Dani through this, excited to see if she forms a bond with anyone in the next story aside from Danny.
I did really feel something for Danielle in this piece, living on the streets with no family and no other support must have been difficult. The way you described her emotions I enjoyed, I felt like I was getting a lot of depth in her character and would like to say again that I love how you made Danielle and Danny two seperate characters with similarities. Well done.
The writing is a little choppy but considering it being written seven years ago, but still didn't take away from the plot.
Quite enjoyed the story and will begin on the next,
| spatterson chapter 2 . 8/28
I don't see why the GIW are still after Danny when he saved the world. HE'S A HERO, STUPID GUYS IN WHITE! They deserve to go to prison.
| Zia chapter 19 . 7/17
The response I wish she had:
"Yeah, but they never included the Funky Chicken."
| Review101 chapter 14 . 6/3
I think the phrases were good they weren't cheezy enough to dip nachos in though
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/12
that was so freaking amazing! I loved it as much as a pig loves not being bacon, which means a hella lotta love
| dani phantom admirer chapter 2 . 4/29
Love it please don't stop makein the storys
| John george chapter 1 . 4/29
Loved it please keep writing thanks
| voodootamer90 chapter 3 . 3/22
I love it, like it so far.
| FallingNarwhals chapter 2 . 3/8
I'm listening to Error 404 by Martin Garrix while reading this, and it's AWESOME! The story combined with the music, that is. XD
I should listen to Dubstep while reading more often..
| icyblast68101 chapter 11 . 11/6/2014
Dannys parents still don't know who dani is yet. I love this story though! :-)
| Hermione Jean Burton xxx chapter 12 . 11/3/2014
Did you make danny claustrophobic? Cos thats what it sounds like.
| DarknessBeforeTheLight chapter 6 . 10/17/2014
I love this story! It has great charactors, an amazeing plot, and I have seen almost no grammatical errors! It's wonderful!
| DarknessBeforeTheLight chapter 3 . 10/17/2014
I love this story! It brings so many memories of watching Danny phantom as a kid!
| IvyVine6 chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Ohoho. Very nice start, I must say. I'm already hooked.
| SAM PHANTOM chapter 19 . 8/24/2014
THAT IS HILAIRIOUS. IM LAUGHING MY HEAD OFF WITH MY FRIENDS.