Reviews for The One
WingdRouge3945 chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Please update! .

Signed Your Buddy :) Masami ;D
ShellyCullen chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
OMG! What? Ah,you can't write anymore? But your sister will so i guess that will be fine. - Look forward to the new chapters!
Pippa Spark chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
i like this! it's highly addictive.

I really hope that this doesn't get lost in the sea of twilight fics.

the only criticism i have would be try and brush up on your use of punctuation, and more description is always welcome too :)

pippa :)
jish27 chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
hi.. please continue to write your story...

it is really great and exciting...

ShellyCullen chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
OMG! WHERE R U? U didn't forget this did u? Or writers block? I'm sorry if i'm pressuring u. love the story so far! :)
Amberjoe chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
Oh my god that is so amazing ! i am speechless! please write more i am hooked! please!
mysticmoon24 chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
I love this you must continue this !
Charlotte2809 chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
love the story , please hurry up with the next one...
Elmo's-Ninja chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
This story is amazing Update please!

Read Mine? :]
jaspers golden angel chapter 2 . 1/18/2009

awesome story

i hope u write more i cant wait to see wat happens

i think Jess or Tanya shuld be eliminated (or both) so then lauren gets lonely and then tries to be friends with Alice, Rosalie and bella

its just an idea tho

luv ya

Jacob imprinted on me

A is for Angel chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
very amazing chapter:)
Khaos Psyche chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Sounds interesting. I can't wait to see who will get eliminated and what the girls will say when they meet the guys. Update soon please!
GhostThatLikesToRead chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
i love this chapter...

and i was thinking about, if edward and the guys see the girls before. Like, through the window while the girls were playing around in the awosome garden the cullens have.

The girls would be so amaked with the garden, that they wouldn't take it to just stare, so they would start runnung and dacing and laughing.

Emmet (of corse) would notice and call the guys to wacth(the tree hot girls in their garden)jarper would came and edward would not want to becase he thinks this whole thing of 'the one' is stupid(of corse)but he did just for curiosity and then he sees bella laid on the floor looking at the sky like an angel with two ather girls (rose and alice) running and laughing around her .But the girls didn't notice anything.

The guys want to met them because they saw the true bella, alice and rose and because they were not trying to find them like the other girls or wearing (too) hot clothes like the other girls, they were just being themselves.

That would give then some advantage...


sorry for the large review a couldnt help it...

oh, and if you like it, great, but if you dont i'll just have to keep reviewing


please update soon !
ShellyCullen chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
I love it!You should keep going, please!
theycallherkaush chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
I really wanna see how this story is going to end up. I love your plot and everything. I AM SUBSCRIBING TO YOUR STORY :)
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