|Reviews for past tale|
| Nyita7 chapter 5 . 12/7/2008
Well I'm not sure why it was underlined... it was rather hard to read. Dramatic effect?
Well Tancreds in a bigger fix than before... youre gonna explain how he forgot in the next chap? Still very intriging! Write On!
| trollz chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
“You’ll she,” she slipped inside and left them to walk down the street on their own.
should be you'll see
| trollz chapter 3 . 12/1/2008
i would hate that if the guy i liked ignored me or said something like that
| trollz chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
i like it it showw she likes him and has seen him before without makeing her sound like a stalker a lot of people have trobule with that
| Nyita7 chapter 4 . 11/30/2008
This is very intruiging. I like where the story is going!
There are minimal spelling errors and few grammatical... the story's a lil' choppy but otherwise flows wells. Was the end of it in italics cause it was a pretty important scene?
Anyways, Update soon! And write on!