|Reviews for Collision|
| fierysuzaku chapter 3 . 4/11/2013
I've been looking for a story like this. I've just been recently acquainted with X/1999 and Tokyo Babylon so I'm glad to come across such a rare beautiful gem.
A sequel would be nice, but I think I would like to see one where the duplicates of Fuuma and Seishirou to be involved as well as the twin vamps. It would be interesting to see things in another point of view... and I would like vamp!Kamui to meet his Fuuma again.
The flow was good, you've managed to place the characters well and I wasn't confused despite the duplication of characters. I loved the back story you placed there, especially since Clamp didn't explain much on the twins.
Overall, good job! _
| Cim chapter 3 . 10/11/2011
*here trying to click the nonexistence next chapter button, i can't wait for more
| lol chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
| yuien chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Ohhhh! i love this fic so please write a sequel to it. I can't wait to read Seishirou's reaction when Subaru gives him the blood. LOL.
| AnimeFantasy101 chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
I hope you write a sequel to this!
It was really good and I want to find out what Subaru does with the vile of blood!
| burgundy eyes chapter 3 . 6/6/2010
I was not expecting that! Very good ending, but rather unsatisfying. Maybe you can reconsider and write a sequel...? Well, if anyone did take on the challenge, could you let me know? Thanks
What I found amazing while reading this fic, is that I never got confused between the two Kamuis and Subarus. In other resembling stories, I always had to guess who the writer was referring to. Not in this one. Good job!
| burgundy eyes chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
I'm greatly enjoying this story!
You write the characters and their emotions very well, in my opinion.
There's humour, action and a little angst all mixed together. And that can only bring a great fic :D
"Hell. Subaru thanked the Gods his twin was too prideful to plead and utilise his exquisite eyes. Otherwise there was no way Subaru could refute."
| burgundy eyes chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
This story is very intriguing. First chapter was intense! And wonderfully written, I might add.
"We're so messed up."
Lol! I really loved that part with Fuuma and Seishirou :D
| chickenbiscuit chapter 3 . 12/6/2009
Aww, Sei-chan can rip through people with his bare hands. Imagine what he can do with claws now! XD Will his ofudas still work? Since he has become the...species that ofudas repel. *snicker*
| LeiCross chapter 3 . 11/22/2009
Wow very imaginative. You're story is awesome. And it really makes sense, especially why Subaru would be running from Sei.
"The amethyst-eyed male nuzzled his twin’s neck and held him tight, as though he was never going to let go.
But he knew he had to."
Also the whole french kiss thing! *switches back and forth between blushing and giggling*
I'm thinking about taking up your offer and writing a story using that sentence. It sounds fun!
Anyway, great story and awesome job!
| DainoChild chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
I rather enjoyed this fanfic :D It's an interesting idea, and you pulled it off in a skillful, believable way which didn't betray the characters - something which must be really difficult when writing two different versions of the same guy.
Aha, man, the opening line for the challenge sequel is so, so tempting... If I find time, I'll take a shot at it.
Thanks for the enjoyable fic!
| laustic chapter 3 . 11/16/2009
This was a perfect last chapter and it's a shame that real life's preventing you from writing the sequel. I just hope someone will pick up your challenge. (I'm trying to write my own fic amid my crazy RL).
| KitsunePan chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
Awsome story, its really good, mabey when you get some time off you can update? I know what its like with collage hell Im almost done *one more term to go!* anyways Ill be waiting ja~!
| yumitadashi chapter 2 . 8/2/2009
Woah, I loved it *_*
*tempted to read it AGAIN*
You're awesome! The story is cool, I like the way you made the characters interact (?) with each other (mostly the thing with the twins and the other ones from X)!
I hope I can read some more of it soon :)
| TheRecorder chapter 2 . 2/5/2009
Okay, so this is how it went down.
I read the fic. Flawless. Pure genius. Loved it.
I read others' reviews. You know, to check to see if my sister got here before me. Shocked she hadn't, as she recommended it. Even more shocked there were only five.
Finally, checked the author profile. To see if you had any plans or delays in updating that inevitable ensue any form of writing.
Imagine my surprise.
I thought my life was going to end there. NO fanfics? NONE? If not that little edit at the bottom, my heart would have stopped beating.
Now, I'm not saying you must interpert it this way, but I have to say something, as my frantic fear of this fic disappearing shadows my every word.
Yaoi is okay.
Yes, it makes you feel gulity some times. And no, it is not very well condoned in the church. But do you ship real life men together? Look up real people gay porn?
If you do, then you're probably right about reassessing your faith. Because, not to break the calm, reasoning tone, but it's kinda gross 0.o
Back on topic, assuming you don't, however, as I don't, then writing fanfics about Fuuma and Kamui and Seishirou and Subaru is not wrong, at least not in my opinion. Let's face it, the actual real canon was written with that intention in mind. So it's not like you're finding what wasn't put there to begin with.
And plenty of people are Christians and write un-Christian like material. Most fantasy writers are Christians or another religion that goes against their material. You obviously have a gift for writing this kind of thing, something this site is obscenely starved of. So please don't resign from writing yaoi.
I would use myself as an example of people who have written yaoi, dealt with whether it was right, and resolved my problems if not for the sadly true fact my writing cannot compare to yours. One of those inargueable facts of life I guess. The sun shall shine, the night will fall, and my writing will not equal yours.
Oh right, digressing again. My point being that, yes you said you will continue writing X/19 fics, but I know all too well that giving up one part makes it all too easy to just let go of the rest.
And to conclude, I know I sound like an idoit, and I will probably regret spilling everything that crosses my mind come morning, but right now, I'm glad I got my point across and hope to see more beautiful, lovely, inspiring chapters from you.
As I said, the sun shall shine, the night will fall, my writing will not equal yours and it's sad day when potential like this lost.