Thank you for putting effort forth and writing the story. So far, I would like to see a little more plot and less sex. Their entire encounter so far seems to be sex. I thought maybe that they would learn more about each other first, but they both seem like they wanted to do things backwards. Of course, things have changed since 2010. I remember how it used to be back then.

I'm so worried and confused about leah. she's bisexual? ! I think she needs therapy

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I don't understand in previous chapters Laurent said that he had rough sex with the victim to make it comparable to the victim from James. Now it says he cannot get it up?

thanks so much for completing and keeping this posted for us;) and you are real evil for leaving it here;D

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Another great story. I loved it so much... I love their love: so beautiful. Thank you for sharing

Awesome, awesome story. The ending felt a bit... abrupt... but that's the ending you wanted so good job.

I read this about a year ago and come across it again and decided to read it again because I liked it so much the first time. I know you said you wanted to end it here but I would love to see a sequel. Leah defiantly has some unresolved issues. These characters are amazing and have so much more to offer. I'd like to read about the delivery, Jasper and Alice's reunion, lol some time in the rv would be awesome, these two with their baby girl and whatever amazing things that only you could come up with. Just wishful thinking on my part. I read all of your stories and will continue as long as you keep putting these great stories out there.

:) loved this story

I love this story. The characters were great and the intertwining of the past and present was great.

Just my opinion, but I think this is pretty unrealistic. I doubt a woman who was nearly raped would be fucking some guy an hour down the road. It makes me squeamish that Bella just brushes it off like it's no biggie, when it is really huge. Your story, and yes, fiction, but I don't think sexual assault should be minimalized.

I think I'll stop reading here, I don't believe jasper deserved a happy relationship, he became an asshole. And early signs are, they may be buddy buddy in future. Plus Edward is a jealous dude, I don't see how he doesn't get jealous each time he sees that tattoo..

I just don't like this jasper and hate that Bella has a tattoo of him. And really, bella , jasper, Jake, and Leah confuse me still.

...all this is too coincidental lol. I comment that the accident bit is clever but to keep adding on to it like this is a bit... Superficial.

Well... The killer was gonna kill her anyway and he saved her and he could be after her cause she is a witness. Sometimes edddies lack of logic for angst is kind of freaking frustrating.