|Reviews for Swamp Magnolia|
| saltyavocado chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Oh, I really liked this oneshot. The symbolism was beautiful, as well as all the foreshadowing and depth of character that you portrayed. Swamp magnolia indeed.
There were some passages that I felt were just a bit flat, like the description of Yuuko's dress, and there were others that amazed me. I like this one especially.
"She wondered which had come first: the silly, fun loving drunk, or the solemn dimensional witch? Or had they always been together as facets, as inexorable as the endless cycles of day and night."
A thought provoking observation indeed. This passage also garnered my admiration, with its deep insight.
"Seeing, contrary to popular wisdom, isn't believing," Yuuko said. " It's where belief stops, because it isn't needed any more."
Again, good job writing this piece. Kudos!
| Doctor Reaper chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
aw. taht was really sweet. you got himawari right on.
| TheLadyPendragon chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Beautifully written. You've done Himawari justice. Good job.