Reviews for The Trip Home
Elle Whitecap chapter 39 . 11/7/2020
I thought I was going to read a kinky story with little substance, but it turned out to be a sweet and kinky throuple story that was unexpectedly deep. I really enjoyed it. The only thing I will say is that I felt the balance of the relationship was off. I feel like Jasper and Edward somehow have a deeper connection. They seem to talk about things and make de idioms apart from Bella.
Guest chapter 39 . 10/14/2020
So sad to be finished reading this it was beautiful bay story I have ever read on this site, wish it never had to end!
dandelion1112 chapter 1 . 1/3/2019
I just found this story and I like it! It's sassy, it's sexy, it's different and it is very well written. Thank you! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and the outtake!
kellvamp74 chapter 1 . 11/26/2018
oh fuck me, I dont think I have a big enough fan
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 39 . 12/11/2017
Loved this story and their journey! They are an amazing trip and I can't wait to start the sequel!
Cullen Cousin chapter 39 . 9/30/2017
Thoroughly enjoyed the story and I'm off to find the sequel!
Cullen Cousin chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
Fully enjoyed the story and I'm off to find the sequel!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 10 . 9/7/2017
Dude this story. Has me FEELING THINGS.. Like God they are so fucking HOT. I'm a female and with another woman, but your stories and words with Jasper, Edward, and Bella being together sexually makes me remember and feel and it's just amazing. You have a way with words, which I am very grateful for!
Guest chapter 39 . 10/16/2016
Great Story
Manasseh chapter 39 . 7/29/2016
I think you did a great job of writing a poly story where the love was equally distributed. Most stories I have read where there are two guys and a girl, the female always comes off as a after thought or just a sex doll. Thanks for sharing your imagination, I really enjoyed the ride!
PAT2024 chapter 39 . 12/16/2015
First time I read a poly story, I was rather reluctant at the beginning but the power of their love was so beautiful, I really loved it in the end. Thank you for opening my mind. Nice lemons too. I can't wait to read the outtakes and the sequel, thank you for sharing.
Ninienboite chapter 10 . 11/2/2015
Very hot and great story. Love is Love. Thanks!
rossrochelle81 chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Hey wow this chapter is very interesting. Love the word play.
kittiekatz34 chapter 14 . 11/7/2014
i never ever thought i would read a polyvore story. but this one is absolutly beautiful. i stay up when i should be sleeping but im always excited 2 see whats next. keep the great work up
SiriuslyPink chapter 25 . 10/14/2014
Why are we just now learning that Bella has been talking to Alice via email?
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