beautifully dark and entrancingly written- you have a gift for words. characterization was lovely and easy to identify and the elaborate descriptions and raw feeling make this a piece to be proud of. great work!

Ooh, lovely. I especially liked Watanuki's spooky cooking and the bittersweet nature of the story.

Niice. I love confusing :D I love Watanuki in this (and Doumeki asking for pie, god), he's still funny and himself while still in tone with the fairytale atmosphere. Great work :)

Cool. I like the disorder.

This tale is charming in such a way...it really wraps you into the story.

I liked it. A few things I didn't understand at first but, dunno, it left to the imagination and I liked that as well.