Reviews for First Breath
Fandomfangirlno1 chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
Loved it was so good.
Fandomfangirlno1 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
That was just BRILLIANT!
SingItForTheWorld chapter 3 . 8/15/2009
yay love it! You did a good job ;)
bookwurm23 chapter 3 . 1/6/2009
Great job! I really liked this story! I didn't realize it was done already when I subscribed to the alert, so I'm sorry about that extra email. Great job. I like it alot. Sometime too much fluff gets a little annoying. I thin you did it well. Great job!
bookwurm23 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Wow. Great job, Dicey! (Do your parents like to play dice? Hm... But, still, it's unique, and I like it.) I really like it so far! Keep it up, it's a great idea!

Megan Chelsea Micheal chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
i liked it too. there where a couple of missing words. lol but it was easy to fallow your train of thought.
jennyabc chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
uh i liked it berry mucho hehehe i always wanted to read what happened between Alice and jasper good job ]keep up the good work mate!
splishsplash3 chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
I love Alice and Jasper! They are so cute together, and I really love this, because Stephenie Meyer barely talks about their relationship in Twilight. Please continue writing!
guinnessdahorse chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
This is really really good! I really hope you continue and update soon! I can't wait to find out more about Jasper!
amazing07 chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
I love it. I could so see it happening this way. You simply must continue.
Mad Mistress of Death chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Hey this is really good, you should continue to write on it!