Reviews for Brave New World
orangetree chapter 6 . 10/4
Hmmm, I'm a bit confused. Not because of the plot or the setting of the story or even the writting style, but because the characters seem a bit weird - specifically Kakashi and Sasuke. After a couple of chapters I got on board with the fact that the characters are more grim due to this situation they're in, but why the change in Sasuke's personality from caring to abusive all in the same timeline / event? And though I appreciate the mystery you're creating with the other flashbacks and snippets, I'm not sure if they're from various lifetimes/reincarnations of SakuSasu or potentially hallucinations. Because again these flashbacks themselves aren't consistent with the characters, though I can imagine they're not always Sasuke and Sakura. Generally though I applaud your creativity and celebrate the confusion/mystery. It might also be helpful to use a beta / peer to review to ensure the mystery isn't confusing the readers in the wrong way (which it may be in my case).
AllFourSeasons chapter 11 . 4/23
Okay honestly I didn't even know what was going on in the first couple chapters all I knew was that damn right I love how I don't know what's happening because dhaigixjsbxs it's just so gud.

Even without writing full completely shitty sentences those clues and short clips God it builds an image that keeps on morphing and changing every time a new chapter is introduced and god.


You are so many times fucked up. And god Sai you're just fucking up shit too.
PrincessAkiraaa chapter 10 . 12/24/2016
You need to update :((( it is literally my favourite fanfic
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2016
PrincessAkiraaa chapter 11 . 7/12/2016
I'm rereading this story, it's so amazing and I really hope you do update soon
jojo mayes chapter 7 . 3/6/2016
is good
Guest chapter 11 . 5/13/2015
fucking amazing but wtf Sasuke irughierghier fucking asshole jefuewhfi SAKURA HANG IN THERE
meg13bloodrose chapter 11 . 10/6/2014
although at first i was extremely confused with the constant injection past memories and quotes... i eventually got on board with your writing style...i hope you continue this story because it atopped when things are just getting good :)
unearthing chapter 11 . 7/16/2014
This story is killer! I mean obvs you know it but I have never read anything like it and I'm totally enraptured by the originality of the plot and the twists and yooo it's just too good! What interest does Itachi have in Sakura? What is the endgame with our villain's plans of experimentation and drugs and numbering folks? Is there an organised resistance as well? I'm almost leaning towards a narusaku ship in this fic but I love the angst of his unrequited love. Did itachi assault Sakura? I feel like there would be more repercussions.

Anyways this is amazing and I hope you find time and inspiration to update again soon.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/10/2014
I love this!
can't wait for the next one!
henneko chapter 11 . 4/9/2014
It's been almost a year since the last update but this is so amazingly written and I hope that you may decide to continue this lovely piece of work someday :)
hama431 chapter 11 . 1/12/2014
A m r a k l o ve chapter 11 . 8/14/2013
Oh my god this is perfect! You write beautifully! Seriously, I just read the whole thing in one night and my eyes can't hold any longer I need to sleep but your story was worth everything. :D

I like how you keep Sasuke's cold personality, it makes it more real.

I love this I just hope that you don't leave the story because is one of my favourites and that's HARD to get xD jk but I'm addicted to your fanfic, definitely! OwO

Please I want the next chapteeer -w-
guest chapter 11 . 7/8/2013
great job
NewYear's Tragedy chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
Very good story and plot. Can't wait to read more. You take such an interesting stance and develope it around your characters. Keep up the good work.
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