Reviews for Lullabies |
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![]() ![]() I wish my teachers were like that... awesome story btw :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story and please continue it _ |
![]() ![]() Great writing! Love your stories! The only think I would say is that 'I have to count things' is hardly enough for a diagnosis, especially by a non-professional. Contrary to popular belief, counting and/or touching stuff repeatedly aren't the only signs of OCD. I myself have mild obsessive compulsive tendencies, and it does not show that way. I have to repeatedly check if my door is locked. Ten, twenty, thirty times every night, and when I force myself to stop checking, I feel anxious. I have problems focusing. I'm distracted most of the time. This chapter is amazing, as are the other ones, I just find this part a tad unrealistic. Wonderful story! -Kai |
![]() ![]() ![]() its also super cute to see remus as another father figure to jazzy, i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() this and a lord of the rings fic with oyendil (soul friend) are favorite relationships of mine. Strictly platonic, but still soul deep |
![]() ![]() ![]() i always love it when there is a bond that is just as intense as a mate but is more like a soul-friend. I am a sucker for romance, but just as much I absolutely adore it when there is a friendship that is closer than family |
![]() ![]() This is amazing please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what do you mean edward had the same height as him?Aren't Harry only in 5 foot 5 incies? Compared to Edward harry not that tall |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooo now Edward know to PTSD to Harry! Oowww si cute that ... Edward trata de no sobresaltarlo. But yeah! Now they talking this is a advancedI like the chapterwell we will reading in the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooo it was short but I like that! Oh no why I think that the plans for Edward don’t work with he’s planing XD hahahaha AndPoor Harryhe it’s veeery bad and nooooo Hermione and Ron really death |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! I love that! I really love that paranoid Harry! Hahaha oooo I’m sorry, my English is veeery bad but I read the story thanks to translate to fanfiction app, but I’ll try to leave a review. But it’s reallly difficult write in English. Sooo I really hope to make himself. But I should leave review with words on Spanish. I hope that you don’t angry for this. I really love this chapter, I love that Harry every time see the space XD XD and woooow harry it’s really traumatized by the war poor Harry. the friends are dead?hermione and ron? Nooooand Neville or Luna? Weasleys family? But it’s really good that Harry can talk with Moony. That Harry stay with moonyAdore Moony how lover uncle. Well, we will read us in the next chapterthanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Complex story and very maturely presented. It’s raw emotions are believable. I might be getting dizzy from all the changing POVs! It’s thought provoking. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for next update ~ |
![]() ![]() Espero que continues con la historia pronto por favor gracias |