|Reviews for Third Life|
| RoseXshapedXtears chapter 34 . 2/24
This is a wonderful story, one of the better ones I've read in a while. I hope you will continue it sometime!
| nostalgiakills chapter 34 . 12/15/2013
This story seems exceptionally long considering that fact that it isn't actually that long. I'm not sure if this is abandoned, bit if it's not you should try to sped things along just a bit to avoid lingering on the mundane everyday things. A little action never hurt anyone.
| Suffermysolipsism chapter 34 . 7/16/2013
Brilliant, some other characters like the wolves would be welcomed though.
| dark m00n angel chapter 34 . 7/5/2013
Omg poor Charlie he was in love with her... This is great story pls update soon!
| CryptIXeeper chapter 6 . 4/26/2013
I just felt the need to review here, sorry, but that rubber band of disbelief? Snapped it right in half.
It was a good story, good premise. The problem is the characterization.
I mean, I enjoy a level headed Hermione as well as the next person, but she's just a cool-cuecumber though the entire thing.
So I was turned into a vampire against my will?! It's fine, it happens. So my sire just happened to be in the living room across from me?! No biggie, we're cool. No questions about where the hell I am, when I got here, or how this happened?! No problem, water under the bridge.
No anger, no pain, no contemplating her sense of self while suddenly having this life-changing catastrophe occur to her person after all the other shit she's been though?! Well good golly, that's fine too.
Sorry, sorry, but she's the golden girl, genius of her peers, she's survived a war and come out mostly intact, but one moment she's hit with a dark ritual/curse/thing and the next she's in a house? Unknown surroundings? Unknown honest-to-goodness-dark-arts-vampires-she-read-abo ut-in-books? Not on full out PTSD war mode?! Especially after the managere of dark creatures she went up against the final battle?!
Ah Ah, Sooooryyy, try again later, I call Bull Shit.
| Michelle Black a.k.a Elle chapter 34 . 1/2/2013
Ohh! I didn't even know you updated, well done! How long are you planning to write this?
| anon chapter 24 . 11/23/2012
Not soccer, football. Hermione is British. Remember the way British people talk.
| Autumn DeMayne chapter 34 . 11/20/2012
I have enjoyed what I've read so far and would love to read more. I hope you decide to continue on writing this story.. :)
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