Reviews for Uncontrollable
illusionneverchangedx chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
wow... THAT. WAS. AMAZING! i love itachi's last words ;D great fic! XD
DesertGirl chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Absolutely extraordinary! This is probably the best fic I have read in a very long time with this couple. I absolutely loved the way you incorporated the hate between the two, most authors either don't have the patients or skill. The emotions were portrayed clearly and you could almost feel the grief Sasuke displayed. It wasn't overly dirty, but enough to satisfy, and thank god! You didn't use dirty words! I applaud you!
runswithskizors chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous writing. It was to overly complex with its detail but not a 5 year old's writing that is so common o this site. I'm impressed. It was beautiful. nice work.
Veja24 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
That was very good! I only wished there was more dialogue.
Sailor Jupiter156 chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
oh please make a next chapter
DearMyDreamer chapter 1 . 11/30/2008

deamon.m chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
oh my... this twisted love is beautiful XD
Lybe chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
I like the way you made Sasuke's emotions clear for the reader. The way you made him conterdict himself was a smart move on your part. For example, how he hates and loves the feelings that the butterflies in his stomach give him (since Itachi is the cause of it).

This is nicely written, so I'm curious; will there be a second chapter?