Reviews for Setting The Table
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
loved it!
intensewhatever chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
LOL! I liked it!
Edward.love.of.my.existance chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
I absolutely loved it. Very cute.
ilovelucas4lyf chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Happy Thanksgiving!

ok, there needs to be more major holidays...

im liking these one-shots!

they are EXTREMELY good

and are you sure i cant borrow either one of you?

and lol at the washcloth

bella could have some fun with that washcloth!

this seems soo real..

u both have INSANE talent at writing lemons!
smilelikeacullen chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
that was awesome and soo hot, i wish my thanksgiving was like that! it should be a story i love t his edward and bella!

hope you had a wonderful thanksgiving !
ObsessingOverEdward chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Two things I thought of as I read this:

I get the distinct feeling that this is like phone sex for you two. Or maybe foreplay.

and

Hayden, she's teaching you how to be a good husband by making Edward so damn perfect. Learn well. A man that know his way around a kitchen and does whatever you ask is every woman's dream.

Friggin' hot lemon. Gotta go, I need to go wake up my husband now! :o)
Imaginings chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
holy crap.

WHAT WAS THAT?

I think my eyes are popping out of their sockets.

_ very good! And I
amberrx chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
GOD what is UP with Thankies Day and CASSEROLES?

I SWEAR TO CHRIST!

Which I probably shouldn't.

Because it offends Christians.

Yaay for atheism!

Hahaa.

Okay I'm not really atheist.

More agnostic.

But how 'bout let's not have this conversation now haha.

The word 'potatoes' makes me giggle.

Not a good combination when you're talking about mind blowing (tee hee, blowing) sex.

FUCKIN' AWESOME!

Love you guys so much.

My feet are cold!

Okay, Hayden.

PLEASE do me.

Heath- Ashel-13, you're invited too!

Hot damn.

Hot. Damn.
briiittx xhc chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Holy crap!

That was so hot!

I loved it!

Very dirty too!

Hehe!

Your amazing at writing lemons!

Keep them coming!

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Music ADD chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
That's one way to distract your wife, and a damn good way too.
edwardsothalova chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
holy heck that was hot!

you two work wonders...

xoxo

jennie
Maid With The Flaxen Hair chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
God after i need a really really cold shower! That was amazing like one of your best ever (i think). God it's almost unfair when ever people write these since Edward is fictional and i know that he can never do any of that and there's no way my boy toy (actually boyfriend) would ever do that.

Becks
missspetrova chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
HOT! *takes cold shower*

lol

and You guys are absolutely amazing together!
fymd-mk chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
ohmyfreakingcarlisle! i will never be able to hear the words set the table without thinking of this now! thanks a lot...altho it was amazing xD gotta love DTE...

you should write more smutty oneshots! i mean xmas is coming up...new years...?
LilMelxx chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
that was um WOW

im going to take a cold shower now!

LilMelxx
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