Reviews for First Dawn
Erin da half-vamp demi god chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
i can't wait for the next chap but try to make it longer :)
XxBCgymnasticsxX chapter 2 . 7/6/2009
it's really good, update!
XxBCgymnasticsxX chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
wow, this is really good!
PotteryScout14 chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
Hurry you should update soon!
cool-gal95 chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
Nice...plz continue this. It is really good D
denizcullen chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Please keep writing I love the story
trallgorda chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
MORE MORE MORE! I want to hear about their classes, what lunch is like, and what they did after their first day! I can't wait!
Gold Eyed Girl chapter 2 . 2/6/2009
i like that vertion of it, no one really cares until Bella gets there! The different povs are well done, and fit the characters! keep writing!
NeverCriticizeRomeo chapter 2 . 1/20/2009
update soon!
tokio33 chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
i love keep posting
TeamVampire chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
Okay, it's worth reviewing and subscribing to. ;)

I like it so far. Hard to tell, but I think it'll turn out well. Update again soon!
Gold Eyed Girl chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
First of all, Alice and Edward start as /freshmen/ when they go to a new school. the younger they are, the longer they can stay in one place. They are juniors when bella arrives two year later. other than that, i thought you did a great job! Jessica was very shallow, and seemed a lot like the character in the movie, I could totally see it in my mind. Please update!

Love, Claire
interestingstuff chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
i love it
sophiemayb chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
that was really good. I really liked it :)
HairSpunofGold chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
fab start to the story i like it :)
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